rate_review Reviews

I am Hooked....and anyone who is hooked on a good story...well needless to say I want more. This is brilliant and I can't wait for more and please keep it going please

Worst storytelling I have ever read. And that is saying a lot.

~Mia

Perhaps, you should stick to role playing or writing plays...

I'm all for reading about odd kinks, but that has got to be the most bizarre, ill put-together piece of prose I've ever read. This was the most strangely worded and unbeleivably grammar-lacking story ever composed. Every character was so OOC that it wouldn't have mattered at all if the names were changed and it was posted under a different genre or even as an original-- nobody would know the difference. Nice try, but seriously... Was this a parody or something?

I don't think I have ever read anything so odd! It was meant to be funny, yes?