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Hi! I don't really understand what's happening, but i hope that with more chaps i will, so please review soon!

You have sparked my interest. You desperately need a beta reader though. Here's an example of what needs beta-ing, with the corrections in parentheses(): "use the fatality(facility), tack(take) a shower, wash hair, sell(spell) hair dry, get dress, brush teeth, then feigner(figure) out what to do with his hair" This was one sentence. I really like your idea so far, you just need to add a bit of a shine. GOOD JOB!