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for Consequences and Complexities

by ckllsdam

person JanisJ
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi, its QQ again (and a comment from an email from my best friend, let's call her MG):

"Awww I read the new chap of the consequences fic, it was soooo cute. I hope she updates soon!"

We've been discussing your story and both agree it's the best quality fic on this site currently. I wanted you to know you've got two faithful readers (she reads on her phone and can't review-- not even the fics I've written FOR her!) I seriously don't understand why you haven't been getting more of a response... It blows our minds that some of the poorly written stories out there-- via concept or execution or grammar-- get people dropping all sorts of nice notes and an exquisite work such as this isn't getting more attention. Really, you should be proud that you are doing such a wonderful job!

Normally, I would just speak for myself, but I know how giddily happy it makes me when I get a review for a fic I've put an effort into makes me, I wanted to extend the same happiness to you... And let you know that you have got two fans that are talking about your story. We really love how its unfolding (and Narcissa and Lucius' "secret plans" are to get the two young parents together, right?)

(OK, fine! I'm also trying to inspire your muse!) Happy writing and I(we)look forward to more :)
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
your stories are both facinating and frustrating. I while i like learning how draco learned to cope with everything that happened to him i want nothing more than to skip ahead where the actual story is taking place. its good but frustrating at the same time.
person JanisJ
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am continuing to love this story... I really like Draco in therapy-- you write it very realistically.
I sent the link for the first part to my friend (who will only read completed works-- got burned by an abandoned story years ago) and she loved it too...
AND, here's an email she sent to me last night: "I finished that story and broke my rule and started the in progress sequel, even though I should be sleeping!"
Thought you'd feel honored that she broke her rule for you!
We look forward to more (and are trying-- and failing-- at being patient) Happy writing!
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah!!! I loved the first story to pieces! I really enjoy the complexity and the psychological development and explorations. The time travel in the first story took some SERIOUS getting used to. Now I know what to expect and come to look forward to the little insights!
person JanisJ
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was SOOOOOO happy to see this sequal! Please forgive me but I've been a horrible fanfic reader in that I never left a review for the original, even though I kept meaning to and was really into the intense plot and characters... You really write beautifully. I look forward to more...

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