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for Unspeakable Sorrow

by CeliaEquus

schedule January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved the "consequences" of Hermoine's threesome in the past!! A boy and a girl, and even better...one from each.

I am headed off to read the third story now.
schedule January 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, not fair--you got me hooked into the story! I always did love fanfics with under represented pairings. You did a good job with this one (although I would love to read more smut scenes ... please? lol)

Can I make one request though? Can you change the formatting of the story so that there is more space between each sentence and paragraph? I find it hard with my eye sight to try and read the lines so close together.

Otherwise--good work! I can't wait to read more!

Until your next chapter!

Love, Hugs, and Kisses

Koolgirl18
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you know i loved this lots and lots, and I can't wait for the follow up

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