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for Canis Lupus: Redux

by DarkSynfulLegend

person JanisJ
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's great to see this being re-worked and expanded on, making it even better (and I loved it the first time around!) I love that you are incorporating more communicative behaviors of Harry in his husky form. Can't wait for more.
I got impatient and went back to the old version and re-read it today... I totally forgot about the bath scene. My husky hates getting wet... and it's not just a general dislike of soap and water, it's actually a survival instinct for northern breeds: Getting water-logged/soaked with water is very bad in that if the weather temp. drops to freezing, they can die. You should see her after a bath-- she wants reassurance and love, but there's a lot of bared teeth and grumbling/muttering under her breath involved with her irritation at me.
She also does the wolfie thing of a "pack rally" that they do when the group she's decided is part of her inner circle/family reunites... It is more of an "A-roo-woo-woo", with tail wags swaying her whole hind end and brushing of shoulders and legs.
Ayla and I raise our hackles in sympathy with Harry at having to deal with Lucius, then Dumbledore... then all the death eaters in general... Keep up the great work. I look forward to more soon! Muses be with you... :)
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! I remember reading this story a while back and absolutely loved it. Thanks for rewritting it, however it still does not change my opinion of it. It's still great so keep up the good work. Harry/Snape stories are the best!
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like your fic, it caught my attention. I hope Harry will be okay and hope that you will update soon. I can't wait to see/read what will happen next. And why was Snape crying? I wonder. Anyways I will wait patiently as I can...try anyway.........


HURRY! I can't wait!!!
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Love it! Love it! I can't wait to read more!
person Moi
schedule January 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
See my review at your first version of this story.
Thanks again!
Moi
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I loved this story from the begining when you had first started it. I love it so much that as soon as I saw this up I couldn't help but squel. And as before I will stick by you to the very end...especially since there will be anal*Cheeky grin*. You go love!
schedule January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A re-write, how wonderful! I enjoyed this story the first time so I'm vey much looking forward to the new and improved version.

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