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by inuren

schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story.
Keep up the great work.
Please update soon.

SM
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love it
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i do hope that harry is able to freed before he gives birth to his children i still say that he should fine someone to love him i do hope that his children will be protected i also hope the rapes stop
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
am also lean toward percy or ron getting the twins killed i do hope that harry will get free before the babies are born one because not only has he been abuse by the dursley, s and used bye everyone but how long do you think it before someone fines his children looking forward to more but please get harry out of there soon. are i can se him being free before the birth of his children and whys has draco look into hid trunk yet
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like the story. Maybe the Traitor should be someone who you would never thing of... say someone like Longbottom. I mean who would think Nev to be a Traitor right?
schedule January 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update and I liked how you mentioned the rape, but didn't make it graphic. I can't wait to see what will happen next and whether Harry will be released or not. I hope Harry is proven innocent soon and is freed and he can keep the babies. I still want Harry to leave Draco and make Draco suffer, for ever believing Harry was the traitor. I hope Harry finds someone else and I want to know what the healer will do now, that the rape is known and that Harry is pregnant. Will he be given a proper trial now and be proven innocent or not. Please update soon.
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I hope the real traitor is captured soon and Harry's released and Harry makes them pay for what they did to him, especially Draco, for ever believing it. I mean if Draco really cared he would of believed Harry. I hope Harry finds someone better than Draco and the babies are okay. Update soon.
person nyks
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, I hope you continue this. :) And I hope nothing bad happens to Harry's babies... That would be too cruel...
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story with the potential to be great. Keep up the good work. I can not wait until the next chapter.
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story..i cant wait to read more

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