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April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i'd say it worked pretty wedll
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April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice little chapter here! I was wondering if the Daily Prophet was it or not then I scrolled down. Great work, can't wait to see Harry kick Draco's butt!
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April 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
okay so doctor didn't put the babies in his report and remus is coming backand i still say draco doesn't deserve harry because his hot for harrys alternated form any way want more love this story i also want everyone to suffer harry should give his granfather a chance and see if he would help harry get back his children
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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Malfoy, malfoy, malfoy. *shakes head at him.
seriously, after what he did he really needs to leave well enough alone.
will we be hearing anymore about Harry's kids? I can't see him just buggering off to be an elemental and leaving them hanging considering the results of his life when left parentless.
btw, some further indication of when you're shifting perspective would be good. I can mostly pick it up but it's still a bit confusign.
seriously, after what he did he really needs to leave well enough alone.
will we be hearing anymore about Harry's kids? I can't see him just buggering off to be an elemental and leaving them hanging considering the results of his life when left parentless.
btw, some further indication of when you're shifting perspective would be good. I can mostly pick it up but it's still a bit confusign.
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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great chappy hope you continue it soon
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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
its a good story...what is he doing to get his kids back? why does he have to be so mean to his great grandfather?
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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yeah i started looking forward to more come on harry more damage and get your babies why hasn't snape told draco about his children yet
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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well, ouch, bitter much. Still he has a right to be. I hope Sev doesn't get his licences pulled. He's the best of a bad bunch so far. About the elemental thing, could Harry be any further in denial. though i do like the idea of him nuking Azkaban. Their treatment of him was horrendus.
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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter, are you going to have snape think about and figure out why someone would refuse the truth potion (can not spell what it is)? Or are you going to have him too busy with the investigation?
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April 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter.. payback is a bitch!!