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I love this story so much. The way Severina wears frilly dresses and ribbons in her hair is delightful. What's Hermoine doing skinned like a Weasley and where's Ron?

and complications ensue. le sigh.

Tom's in! Awesome. I just knew Harry would jump in at the last second. It is obviously beneficial to Harry to demonstrate his leadership skills. It only improve Tom's opinion of him. I wonder what they will have to to in order to control Snape. Also, I love how Hermione switched genders too. I know I would love to try it out myself!

Great chapter!! This story just keeps getting better and better!

I love this story, it has so many twists I didn't see Snape doing that. I can't to find out what else happens.

Wow... didn't expect that. Glad that Harry is innocent of that crime. Poor Tom! Harry+Tom=LoveForever!!!!! :)

great work! can't wait til the next update

I did NOT see that coming at all!!! None of it!! Sev has seriously gone off the deep end ;A; I do, however, love it!! I much prefer Sev holding Tom down than Grindlewald any day. The emotional aspect makes it that much crazier. But will Harry be able to correct this idea Tom has that love should be avoided at all costs? Or just reinforce it?

Great chapter!! Can't wait til your next update!

I wish that I'd get automatic alerts in aff. This is just too much to miss out on. @.@ Imma go read the next chapter~

I enjoyed the verbal exchange between Tom and Snape.

Hmn. You paint a picture of why love is every bit of destructive. A few years back, I could very much agree with Voldemort in the sense that I think that I don't need "love". Love is seemed to be a chemical reaction - that occurs when there is an overload hyperness? >.> which make some believe that chocolate equates to love. Hmmn either way, it makes even the most powerful people - weak and vulnerable. They lose common sense and rationality to experience a fraction of that love... And love, as we know it in history - caused wars.

Although there is a positive view point in that. Love isn't entirely as stupid as I want to believe that it is. It can be used as a motivator. I would recommend a book... that you might have probably read already - but it's really entertaining. Art of Seduction by Robert Greene.

The trust that is placed on others can easily be destroyed in a matter of seconds and I think you deserve praise with always managing to come up with the right arguments as to why - Voldemort is utterly withdrawn from others.

Nyu... if Voldemort has his magic back, there would be no room for doubt when he can freely rape Harry's mind. That'd be awesome.

Since you are so good with emotions... and the like, are you a psychologist? @.@ That would explain a lot though... but if I'm mistaken of your profession or current "course" since I don't know if you're still in college although I know you are already working --- then maybe something related to it.

nyaha. This is just a pleasant surprise. Q.Q Like I said, I'll try to check aff more often now that I know you bring regular updates X3

For now. back to what I was saying...

Idk. You managed to distract readers again - into believing that it was Harry - Harry that raped Voldemort. It's not entirely unfounded that something like that could happen. Harry might be a bit - mentally unhinged with all the things that he's already experienced. I was surprised when it turned out to be Severus.

For one moment I thought that Harry was harboring a second personality or... something of that sort. Can't call it schizophrenia. or can i? *o* not so good with the terms.

then we have~

Severus... who has his own agenda - always serving himself before any other master. Q.Q Harry is always as clueless. How can he not see the signs Q.Q T o T Severus deserves to die for what he did. I think it would be nice if something of that sort happened, but since he is invaluable, I doubt Voldemort would do that... if he could.

>.< Pride is unbecoming when there is so much to gain. Hmn. It is prolly a little painful to see Voldemort so visibly chained down with his inability to use magic.

for one... if there were wards that allowed Severus and Harry to use magic - like the one that Draco had for Harry's apartment, this problem could be easily solved.

Anyway... At least - Severus was very meticulous in making sure that he is the only person that has power within his domain. The only thing that could go wrong for him is possibly - Harry's use of the vow or the debt that Severus owes to him. Tom could manipulate Severus with his emotions.

=.= Yea. I agree that it sucks to be them at this moment. but it's a pretty wonderful epic start for a much more epic revolution. @.@ I mean... they still can't get it right. Those three would be awesome if they somehow - got it in their skulls that a lot could be accomplished if they worked together

meh. can't wait for more. thanks for the update

I was wondering if and when this would up date. Looks like Harry needs more training Huh.