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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story and am glad you had some time to update it is well worth the wait. It is deliciously naughty. Thanks for sharing your talent
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May 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story,the way Hermione seems to know what Snape needs and Snape's Dom. personality peeking through!!! HOT!!!!
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May 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I had to sign-up to this site to just review your story, I would say that saids a lot about how much I love this story and on this site for year read tons of stories. But lately now I got the time on my hand to read as many stories I like on this site, very few has been updating like I would like but I also understand that many of my fav. writers are in college or have jobs with real life stuff going on. So I'm not going to try rush you, I'm just reviewing I'm loving this story and can't wait till your next chapter.
Your story is open me up to a lot of thing I'm wasn't really into but the way you write in though's scenes shocked me and as...wow this really hot and I'm not or was into slash/guy-on-guy but it was put in this story I would not mind because it would work and you do one hell of a job writing it too.
keep the great work!
Your story is open me up to a lot of thing I'm wasn't really into but the way you write in though's scenes shocked me and as...wow this really hot and I'm not or was into slash/guy-on-guy but it was put in this story I would not mind because it would work and you do one hell of a job writing it too.
keep the great work!
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April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is so hot. I've had to stop twice to ..you know.. tend to a few things. Wow! Besides the sex, I am really interested to see how they progress in a more permanent relationship. You're writing is very well done.
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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I continue to be impressed. This is so, so much better than most of the usual slap-and-tickle fics purporting to be hard kink! Severus in particular is really well-written. I could see this story being canon as far as his characterization is concerned. Admittedly, less so with Hermione, but only a bit. She's wonderfully written as well.
And yes, sock puppets are fun ;)
And yes, sock puppets are fun ;)
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April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
good gods this story is hot! i love that snape is a sub yet sometimes a dom, after all i do so love the snarky snape :) keep at it, this story is amazing!
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April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What a WONDERFUL chapter.
The torture in the staff meeting was PRICELESS!!!!!
I really enjoyed the smut-fest in the small room. It started getting hot here too *fanning self*
More, please.
The torture in the staff meeting was PRICELESS!!!!!
I really enjoyed the smut-fest in the small room. It started getting hot here too *fanning self*
More, please.
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April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, his insecurities are so sad, but his need for love and acceptance rival them. I am glad he's found someone who wants to understand him. And, good for Hermione for not simply accepting his actions, but understanding them and trying to level the field. I think she did a bang up job! lol Thank you, HG4eva
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April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was just reading this again just the other night wondering if you would ever update again. So I was overjoyed to see chapter 4! I cant wait for the next update. is this your first story or have you written anything else?
I love what you have done so far!! please keep it up!!!!
I love what you have done so far!! please keep it up!!!!
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April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is fantastic, very erotic and incredibly well written. If you can you should post it on Ashwinder, it would go down a storm there too! Can't wait for more, feeling very thankful for two quick updates :)