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February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Another amazing chapter! Can't wait for the next! ;)
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February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
interesting start to things, very dramatic and touching, especially that funeral scene. few problems with changing from past to present tense in odd places, but overall well written. keep up the good work, i look forward to seeing where you go with it :)
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February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Such an evil cliffhanger. Can't wait till the next chap. You got me hooked!
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February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!! That was EVIL!!! Come oooooooooon more and soon!!! You have me at the edge of the sit. KUDOS~ :D
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm enyoing this story and would love to see more. Kudos ~