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for Amazing Grace

by Kooldragon400

schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved the interaction between the young folk which totally left Lucius out of the loop, I love Luscius but Draco was rather sexy in this chapter.

here's a carrot for your bunnies Xx
person Dawn
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful new chapter. It made me laugh, thanks!
person PoppyMLW
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another fun chptr! Loved draco's new attitude.
person alm1067
schedule March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this and want to see where it goes. Harry and ???? Lucius and Hermione working up to a big blowout??? Where will the story take us?
schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm honestly not sure whether I like the story or your notes better at this point.
But no, it doesn't suck. Even if I do find the switch thing utterly distasteful - where I come from they're used on cattle, not one's children.

Do those rabbits come in black?
schedule March 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This could become my new favourite fanfic very easily! Keep writing your doing a brilliant job so far!
schedule March 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wha-hey, thanks for the explanation about the Harry spinal deal. Yup. Good to go now. I caught up with your fic while mosturizing my feet. Just thought you'd want to know that. I am worried about Lucius' relationship with his newly found daughter. If that was my newly found dad, and my ex step father beating my ass was one reason I had left, I don't give a flying fuck how much I wanted to meet him, I would NOT be putting up with that shite!!! Seems this girl has a big decision to make. Stay with ole Daddy Malfoy and take the switch on a regular basis, thus sacrificing her dignity and self respect, or stay and play happy families but give him hell, or learn to be a better Slytherin and do shit to Malfoy that will embarass him but nothing he could prove. Wonder where it will go? And Granger..... man oh man. I hope she hex's Ron's nutsac off! Too bad she doesn't have a little one-off with Harry.
person moonlight shadow
schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, I'm looking forward to see how it progresses, I don't often leave reviews but felt this deserved one,
I like Lucius' character I imagine it would be very difficult for him finding out he has a daughter well written.
oh and carrots for the plot bunnies, maybe a cookie for the author too
person Shannon
schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story kinda wish Luc wasn't so mean but i cant wait to see what happens next, I love the way you wrote Grace's character shes spunky and I wonder if your going to make harry gay i love when hes the gay best friend but I love the way you write and i cant wait for the next chapter
schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, the bunny was cute. lol I am responding because I really like you as a writer. Right now I could take a switch to Lucius, though. I know he didn't know about her until the day before, but how amazingly unfeeling/uncaring do you have to be to use a switch on a girl that confessed a day ago to having been so miserable with the same treatment that she ran away to a family she didn't even know to a country she's never been to?! ARGH!! I hope at some point Hermione gets to show him the pain of what he just dealt! I have no problem with spanking and such, so it's not that. I just think his words and actions as a response to what was only the truth, showed how awful (dare I say Death Eaterish) he can be. Now, I know (because you are good) I will shortly forgive and forget and fall in love with him, but for now, I am not liking him more than a little bit. Bring on Hermione to put him in his place! :-)

Hugs to you, HG4eva

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