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March 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
:) too nummy for words, LOVED your forward perception of Harry I'll this situation!
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August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I want more!!!!!
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April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
that was hot. congrats
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Alright, between this and Brotherly Love you're definitely one of my favorite authors here.
I love this, I love how forward Harry becomes at the end. Is there a possibility that we could see what happens next? Not in this same chapter as you did say it's a oneshot, but as another story mayhap? Pretty please?
I love this, I love how forward Harry becomes at the end. Is there a possibility that we could see what happens next? Not in this same chapter as you did say it's a oneshot, but as another story mayhap? Pretty please?
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March 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
MOAR, PLEASE?! That was incredible..... but I WANT MOAR!!
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March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on a good job! I'm starting a new thing where I try to vote and review for every story I read on this site now that I've started writing myself. I can't tell you how annoying it is to see yourself getting 100s of hits and yet your feedback is less than a dozen. Critisism, good and bad can be constructive if its not flat-out flaming, right? Anyway...
Great portrayal of Snape. I think you kept him as in character as possible considering how uncannon this relationship is. His second guessing himself is very Snape as is his initial referencing of Harry's eyes as Lily's. It reminds one of his past while making it apparent on some minute level that he sees Harry as an individual now. I also think that Harry's seduction is very Gryffindor as is his reaction to Snape's rejection.
Not to mention his stubborness the next day to continue his persuit. You kept them both very in character and that is something that is not easy when you're putting your own spin on things. Kudos to you! Keep writing and be inspired!
Great portrayal of Snape. I think you kept him as in character as possible considering how uncannon this relationship is. His second guessing himself is very Snape as is his initial referencing of Harry's eyes as Lily's. It reminds one of his past while making it apparent on some minute level that he sees Harry as an individual now. I also think that Harry's seduction is very Gryffindor as is his reaction to Snape's rejection.
Not to mention his stubborness the next day to continue his persuit. You kept them both very in character and that is something that is not easy when you're putting your own spin on things. Kudos to you! Keep writing and be inspired!