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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It was a great story but I got very distracted by the first person perspective. Could u maybe write a story thats in third person perspective ? It's such a pity really cos otherwise it was totally hot...
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo hot
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!! There is nothing like a good malfoy three way!
More more more!
More more more!
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May 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
No - in this situation the first person mode works well. Keep going!