rate_review Reviews

I wish there were more!!! This fic is amazing

This made for some hard reading for me as I quite like this girl, Mari, & hate what is happening to her. However, I am satisfied that she has been effectively rescued by our favourite professor & that he has achieved this without "blowing his cover" ! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
As one can probably tell from my comments, I am very much intrigued by this story &, as ever, impressed with the way its authour describes Severus Snape, making it so easy to "see" him with accuracy, especially within the setting of Hogwarts & his classroom there.(Wish I'd had a teacher like him!)
Only one thing is puzzling me - where are the other reviews? Every other site I review on, I feel I have to fight for my turn or something. But here - nothing! Am I looking in the wrong places, or what?
Btw, I detest the character of Lucius Malfoy & would like to see him get his - right in the neck!

I find this story very gripping. The characters are described with great accuracy: Severus Snape is depicted in such loving detail, that it is impossible to see anyone other than the film character, so well-portrayed by Alan Rickman, & this Lucius Malfoy is truly frightening (although I must confess to feeling only anger & hatred for him as this authour portrays him - he's an absolute swine!) Mari is so carefully & sympathetically described that one can actually feel her fear, not only her first, virginal fear of her first sexual encounter (& under such circumstances!) but then her much greater, bone-deep fear as she awakens to true terror in the Malfoy dungeon. I can only hope that somehow she is rescued & that right soon as I do not think that Malfoy will suffer a change of heart! I am looking forward very much to Chapter 3! (I cannot find any other reviews for this story which astonishes me - am I looking in the right place?)