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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Kupo
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter twenty

I always get a little queasy when they eat the raw meat, straight from the animal. I mean, I like my steaks rare, but that's a whole different ball game! Haha

This was a short chapter, surely I can read one more.

Kupo
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter twenty (or twenty one, I forgot)

How positively gory. I don't ever want to give birth as a woman, let alone as a male dracken! Haha

Very well thought out though, I applaud you.

Now when you adopted this story, did you get every idea about the dracken? Like their instincts, mating rituals, etc? It did you get some and embellish as you went?

Oh lord I need to sleep. But the damned cliffhanger! (Even if I already know what Harry will ask)

Kupo
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter twenty two

I'm having to do this as anon, because all of the sudden it told me I can't review your story more than once per day.

How lame. I was doing it last night. (That's what he said)

Anywho, blood letting, and regulus' story. Well, snape's story haha.

Either way, what a sad thing. I feel bad for him.

One more then THAT'S IT!

Kupo
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter twenty three

Oh my, isn't nasta talented? When I first read this I was like "THANK GOD! NOW I DON'T HAVE TO HUNT YOU DOEN AND MURDER YOU!"

Haha.

But whatever will happen when Blaise, Draco, and max realize what nasta did to their poor, pregnant Harry!

One more. Just one more chapter then sleep.

Kupo
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter twenty.... Four? Haha

Quick thing, they never went to a parenting class. Unless I missed it. Sometimes I do skim...

And uh oh! Harry and Ron together alone!

And now I can't stop reading! I know what happens next and still I can't stop!

You and your amazing writing. Damn you. Lol

Kupo
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter twenty five

That beaker full of fluids sounds absolutely disgusting.

Do you even go back and read through your own stories? Just curious.

I really must be going to bed now!

Kupo
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter thirty six

Well I didn't sleep yet, obviously. Also, in regards to the authors note, I live in Texas USA. In the summer, it's over a hundred ferenheight (I can't spell lol) everyday. Usually hitting to 105 or so. It IS crazy.

Nice chapter, I feel so bad for Harry. He's really going to be suffering during his heat.

Sleep now! I command myself!

Kupo
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter twenty seven

Nope no sleep, couldn't wait to read the smut haha

Oh man, Draco through the whole thing was hilarious. Until they left Harry with no penis to love him. Lol

Ok ok bed now

Kupo
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter twenty something or another

Boy I'm tired. But I can't stop. It's like crack.

I can sleep when I'm dead.

Oh no! A stunner hit Harry. First time I read this I thought "holy shit why can't karma leave Harry alone for awhile?"

Then I realized it would be as interesting.

On a side and completely unrelated note, my empty stomach is making the most amazing sounds. Lol

Kupo
person Anon
schedule January 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter the one with the dracken meeting

I really should sleep. A few points first, then bed.

I loved Harry's interaction with their families, also, Myron is my fathers name, spelled the same way. (Let's just say that one chapter from scaled bits was impossible for me to read! Lol)

I'm also very pleased you addressed the female/female relationship. I was wondering how that worked.

Lastly, to that hope person that gave you shit, some people live to troll. No need to pay attention to them. You are an amazing writer with a vivid imagination and a strong following.

To bed I say!

Kupo

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