So I've read the first 26 chapters in 8 hours! And it's totally AH-maaaa-ZING! I mean that word doesn't do it justice, but I'm a little hard pressed to find words to praise your writing. I had my reservations when I saw that it was 130 Chapters and still a WIP. But once I started, I just couldn't stop! It's 2.00 a.m where I'm from and I'm still reading! And I just had to stop to make a review cause I feel like I would've burst to smithereens if I couldn't tell you what I felt about this amazing story. I'm not usually a person who likes stories with Harry as a sub but you've written it in a way that doesn't give me heartburn, which is what I get when I read the way a lot of people portray subs, especially Harry. I'm an emotional reader and I usually feel everything I read to my core. I love the fact that even though Harry is a sub, you don't turn him into a doormat to be stepped and stomped on. You even threw in a possibility of a switch for Harry which made my heart soar, because! Possibilities! For me that's the best part about reading. The possibilities. It wouldn't matter now if Harry tops or not (though I wouldn't at all mind seeing that come to fruition) because you have put a thought out there. In my eyes, this makes you a Goddess among mere mortal writers ( I saw in a comment that your name was Michaela - hope I spelt that right!). Im thoroughly enjoying this story and don't see my self drifting off anytime soon.
Now the MOST IMPORTANT question - I see that it's still a WIP. Can you tell me if it's closer to finishing or still on-going?
I've got to say, that one thing I hate are WIP's. I usually skip them because I'm too impatient not to know how a story ends but thought I'd give yours a chance since it's so long anyway. But please let me know? I'll be awaiting a response with bated breath.
Love, Kahaele.
Well that was a pleasant mistake I should not have reread this story because I'm now wanting more. I love how rounded the characters are and the unique personalities the children have
I just realized that Snape's mate was probably Regulus. Omg that's so sad. I love this fic so much tho! I signed up for an account just to review it.
Amazing story can't wait for more to come
Actualizaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!
I love your story! I like how you have developed the characters. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope the fae City gets better.
Please update soon! I only discovered this fic last week and read all 130 chapters since! I love it! The story is so good!
I love the story and as an essential worker I to understand the stress and tireness that comes with having to work every day while everyone else stays home but I still love the story and don't you dare kill off Alexander I will not be happy haha. I can't wait to see what you do when little Leolen's Room. The babies are now coming into their own personalities and it's great I just love it thank you so much for all you do.
Ohhh family outing!! I'm so excited!!! Thank you so much for posting even though your busy, stressed and tired from the Covid19 situation ! I've been enjoying all the new posts, it let's me get my recommended dose of drakens!! Hope your well.
I really disliked this story at first, I have serious issues surrounding the keeping or controlling of another person, like it seemed Harry was going to have done to him for the rest of the story. I started reading this one because I finished what's been written so far of Black Heir (please update it again soon!?) and decided to check out something else you'd written. Parts of Black Heir bothered me too, but I really liked the story in general, so I just kept reading. I figured this story would be the same so I pushed through the stuff that made me uncomfortable and kept reading...........................and got absolutely addicted! So I started on The Scaled Bits as well and have been going back and forth between them. I under a week I've made it through 80 chapters of this and 25 of TSB. Not a week of reading on my laptop with my glasses on, no. I've read that much on my tiny ass phone screen with my glasses broken. I still encounter themes that make me uncomfortable, mostly because my childhood wasn't much better than Harry's, but this story is sooooooo good that I just can't stop reading. My favorite chapter from TSB is the one from max's point of view, but I really wanted to see the aftermath of when they woke up from the heat and wrestled him into the wardrobe, then back out of the wardrobe to go see Dumbledore, I'll bet that took some serious effort on Blaise and Draco's parts, lol.