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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person poppy77
schedule March 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! I do have to say though, that given Harry's past it seemed out of character for his mates to just brush Lucius hitting him aside just because they made a truce. I'm curious as to where you're going to go with the underlying tension that they are trying to ignore.

Also, on another note, Harry is an immensely powerful wizard in addition to being a dracken, something that I think everyone could use to remember. Do you have any plans of this happening?

I'm sorry to hear about what happened in RL, my prayers are with you and your family
schedule March 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Of course you should be with your family!!! I always assume that no updates means something happened but I am so so sorry for your loss. Losing a loved one is never easy and I would never expect you to force yourself to write when you don't feel it. Take all the time you need and feel free to ask if you need anything even though you don't really know me. I hope your uncle does better and my hopes are with you and your family. Take your time darling, we'll still be here when you feel ready. :)
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so enjoying this story. It is the second time I've read it through. I've enjoyed it so much I had to read all the rest of your writings as well and I am not disappointed at all. I very much look forward to continuing this story as well as the Life and Times of Harry James Potter whenever life gives you time to write.

If you could though clear up some confusion I have. It appears that Cygnus Black is floating through time. His relationship to Harry has been described 3 ways as far as I can tell. Early on his was Harry's great grandfather. Half way through it was great great and most recently he was 3 greats.

Thank you so much for all your hard work.
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am so sorry for your loss. I am sure everyone will agree with me when I say take as much time as you need and that you will be in my if not all of our hearts and or prayers.



All My Love The Maiden Lyra
maiden6of6the6dark@yahoo.com
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Please accept my condolences on your lost. Know that you and your family are in my prayers.

Thank you for this chapter. As usual, the emotional range you excite captivates me. I dearly love how you manage to make me laugh so often though I think my favorite is when Harry was having a tantrum and got distracted by his wings. I remember do something similar when I was pregnant, all those manic mood changes.

I await the next chapter, not with bated breath, but with the hope that it will mean that you and your family are healing from your loss, regardless of what that will be. Just take your time and heal.
person addiena saffir
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm very sorry about your family's loss. I'm sure she is in a better place where ever that may be. I am absolutely shocked that Lucius was not beaten to death by some angry, angry dominants.
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Take as much time as you need and don't force yourself to do any writing. It doesn't matter how long between chapters it is, I will always be excited to continue reading the story!
person Nicola Farenden
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT!!!!!!! I don't know what you were worrying about on Facebook :) WELL DONE
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved that you have updated.. I was getting worried, but I loved the chapter. I am soo sorry to hear about your Aunt. You have my condolances. Well wishes!! PM
schedule March 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wooohoooo how I love ya how I love ya ! *dances around* great update : ) I just wish Lucius had got what he deserved, and hopefully he still will, I'd like to see Nasta and Max's fathers have a nice long "chat" with him ....so about this daisy chain LOL

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