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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person Jazz
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I feel like it would be easier if Harry put all his childhood memories into a pensive and let his domanents look into it that way he won't have to talk about it and max, nasta, blaise, and draco will be informed. *sigh*
anyway, thanks for posting the chapter no matter how short or long it is and i think the seperate "cut scenes" idea is fantastic, but i worry because you said something about having to wait till after christmas. :( do you mean for the "cut scenes" thing or the next chapter? cause if i have to wait till after christams for the next chapter i think i'll cry.
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
rather than cut bits, think of them as extra's. I think its an awesome idea.
I can under stand the elder mates worry but i believe har has a point. Now is NOT the time. he's held it together well to this point, let it lie a bit longer until his baby is birthed.
person Princesskay1128
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!! As always!! :) I really hope you end up doing something like Snape using oculmency (I have NO clue how to spell that) or Dumbledore giving the boys his pensive that way the baby doesn't get stressed out and the boys still find out how it REALLY was for Harry, not just second hand.
person lil devil
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ALL of the adults knew about Harry's home life not just Molly. Remus, Sereves, Sirus, Dumbledore, Authur, and Im pretty sure even Hermonie knew (why you said other wise idk)
person baka_onna2003
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello again. Once again, loved this chapter (then again, I'm in love with this story, so I may be a bit biased). I think that the shortness of this chapter was very good. It takes time as readers to digest horrible things like what happened to Harry, even though we already know some of what the author is going to write about. A deleted scenes story? Me gusta.

Happy Writings (and quick updates!),
baka_onna2003
person heartstar
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow I liked how you had the mates react. I also like the idea for the out take stories *s* I hope you have a wonderful christmas.
person Ellen
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! I think you handled the dursley part so well, and it's really cute how Nasta comforted Max!
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait for Draco and Blaris to get in on this heehee GREAT JOB!
schedule December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story. I am so glad the turth will be reviled so that miss understandings can be avoided. I can't wait to see what they do when the learn his past.
person Night
schedule December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love it!!! More. More. :D

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