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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Those boys are stupid! I hope Nasta puts them in their place if they try anything because Harry obviously needs sex! Great chapter!=)
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yes on the write...they better not kill Nasta,I like him. great chapter
person Mitsu
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. Goodness. This chapter is much win. Thank you so much for getting Nasta in there! I wanted him to be one of the mates as soon as we 'met' him. So happy right now ^^ Please keep up the great work, and I hope work isn't too heavy for you.
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter. I thought it would be Nasta, but I wasn't sure. Though I did hope that it was, so I was so happy when you made it so.
I think you really should write that heat, cause I would love to read it.
I have a feeling that Draco or Blaise would be the ones to try and kille Nasta first. Perhaps as a joint effort? And then Harry could step in the way and save the day.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
person QuintiliVare
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I accidentally realized that what I pictured Harry in this story to look like, and Brent(the super cute twink pornstar) are the same... Now every time I see porn with him I think 'hum... which one of his mates can the other guy be...
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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person Chloe
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I CANT SEE BEYOND CHAPTER 4...something about it not having a proper disclaimer

pleasepleaseplease this is such a good story!
person lucie
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love this and i go absolutely nuts for it i can't click on the link fast enough lol as to your questions i think it might be draco that will step off the reservation so to speak because they haven't hashed out who's the most dominant yet now that nas has joined, as for the heat its a hot and i think essentual part of the story and i'm looking forward to seeing how the dynamic could possibly change now that there's 4 dominants, plus i'm looking forward to then becoming a proper family because with threesome/moresome there's that pitfall some writers fall in to thinking it's all just about sex and i'm so glad this story is masterfuly avoiding those pitfall's because its the better for it and i'd love to read more about sev and reg i love tnat pairing :-)
person SilverLion
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I went back a re-read (thanks for the quick reference). You said all the horcruxes were taken out simultaneously with old Moldyshorts. BUT in HBP, Reg went after the locket, found it and gave it to Kreacher for safekeeping (before Mundungus stole it from Grimmauld). Shortly after leaving the fake in it's place, he died. Soooo....I'm gonna guess that he's still there unless you prove me otherwise. Therefore, I'm looking forward to whether I'm right, or to be pleasantly surprised at your response. TTFN. BTW, I hope we get to see some other combos amongst the mates soon. I think I'd like to see Draco and Blaise getting it on, or Max and Nasta, or Max and Blaise, etc. etc. etc. YUMMY!
person Aoede
schedule September 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You have to write the next heat. I have to admit I am really glad Nasta is a mate. I am really enjoying this fic. Keep up the good work.

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