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for The Rise of the Drackens

by StarLightMassacre

person liona
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can I vote for both Nasta and Arsenio? :D
If not, then I vote Nasta.
person Kab Bishop
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter! I vote Nasta :D
person magentah
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great update! I'm a little disappointed that things went the way they did with the spanking, to be honest. I was looking forward to Draco punishing Harry a bit (something equivalent to maybe ten spanks or so?) for his own good but it looks like that's pretty firmly out the door. Darn! ;) I didn't think I'd like OMCs but Nasta and Max are sweet. My vote is for either one of them to join the existing trio, but just one! More than four seems a little ridiculous to me. Regardless, you are the author! Write what you like, I'm sure I will devour it just as quickly. Looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Max Max Max!! LOL and he is older in comparison to Harry and I wouldnt want him woth some 60 year old truthfully. Soooo MAX lol although I really liked Nasta in this chapter. I wish things could of started on a better foot with Draco and Harry. I dont like that he did that to poor Harry especially since I like Draco better than Blaise usually- hes my go to slash pairing for Harry but I do like Blaise as a third. But you write him very well so its all good. Please update soon!
person qwerty
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
A vote for Nasta! And Nasta and Max are definitely considered to be older Drakens since Harry is so young!

Great chapter!
person mistalis
schedule July 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think Nasta would be a nice grounding mate for harry.
person Anon
schedule July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
my vote is Nasta
schedule July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
great story...my vote is all three or Nasta and Max.
schedule July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Draco is being punished for what he did. Sure, I understand that he has to be tough towards Harry and I understand his argument perfectly. But he still needs to know what he can and can't do.
And Nasta is just adorable. I love him. I would love to see him as the grounding mate for Harry. Because Nasta seems like the perfect anchor in a stormy world.
I do hope that Draco comes back and apologises to Harry, or at least something similar. Cause I really want some hot smiut ;) and I want more interaction between the members of the newly formed family.
I hope that you'll update soon again cause this story is awesome
person Dekorx
schedule July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I believe 36 is plenty old enough! I'm 21 and 36 seems pretty big of an age difference... and Harry is only 16! The problem with this is there is a 20 year age difference. When Nasta dies, what will it do to Harry? (assuming he would be the new dom, of course) I am feeling partial to Nasta after hearing how much knowledge he has. I think anybody 30 and older would be considered an older dominant. You mentioned already that most subs only choose dominants in their 20's or teens.

As for the vote? I think all three being Harry's mates would be pretty hilarious! However, there would be a lot lost with having to deal with so many dominants, someone would be left out. You should write a side story where that actually happened, just for laughs! Haha.. Hmm. I don't know who I want to 'vote' for, all three of them are likable!

Btw, I'm kind of sad for the loss of Harry's long hair, I pictured it to be so beautiful!

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