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There is very little that can prompt an emotional reaction from me, that being said, I cannot stand the thought of Leolin dying. Please, I beg of you, don't let him. Use that creative genius that gifted him to us, the readers, in the first place and write in something that saves him. A Dracken trait, Phoenix tears, SOMETHING. But please, don't let him die. I wouldn't be able to read that chapter, I would have to skip over it. And Harry needs a serious break. That poor boy has been through entirely to much hell.
Have a Happy New Year.
-Freak M

You could say I'm new reader, I did not comment before actually technically this was the second update since I started following the story and love euu will comment more from now on you deserve feel for butchering the English my native language is Portuguese, I am Brazilian, I will comment in the next chapter in my native language \ o /. I'm crying so much for leolin I love it so much (one of my favorite babies along the Calix and Braiden) I really wish the title'' goodbye'' to be directed to another character, and the blood inside dracken save it, Harry would need a lot of therapy to get over so I think leolin not die because you said the author notes that the anguish / emotional distress in the next chapter would last only half and if not hope you change your mind, loved her oc's (max and nasta mainly ashleigh is a bitch but I love myron and richard, alexander is fun and nicodemus a pervert grid, and like amelle she is a strong woman though somewhat futile) there is a high chance of twins being draco? would be cool if one were blaise draco and it is good so I'm looking forward to the update meantime I torture myself rereading old chapters and having nosebleeds reading your lemons, especially harry / nasta, I love them, there alhuma chance to make harry more naughty things with gifts ginny would be very hot and delicious to read!
That is until the next \ o /

This story is incredible and I've been reading in non-stop. I actually cried at that last chapter, and it's rare i cry at stories. I don't want baby Leo to die :( how will in know when the next chapter is out?

Oh Star, dearie, i seem to have left my heart shattered somewhere around the middle of the chapter. a wondeful job though why do i feel like im gonna cry in the next chapter?

Oh you horrible, bad word, nasty person! You can't make me cry like that! Poor Leolin. *sob*. Please post the next chapter before you go on vacation! Or at least tell me that leolin will be ok! Please! I promise not to call you bad names anymore.

Wow, just wow. I'm sitting hear balling my eyes out. You are an amazing writer. Thank you for sharing your gift with us. I just can't imagine what they must be feeling. The thought of losing a child terrifies me. Just wow.

I can't believe you left us here. A truely heartbreaking chapter and I hope for the best outcome but so is life and it is not always as we wish it, I will be looking for the next chapter daily. Hope you will update soon but family does come first.

Do not kill Leolin please fairies will say what if he dies? they would have to have added retired baby, that beasts like drakens could not lebantar a baby fairy, they are very delicate and blame, making, perhaps, if Harry has another baby fairy it removed to lift them, but I hope not. No, you can not do that, you have to prove to these fairy stuffy drakens that can lift a fairy without being killed. Leolin has also draken blood, could not make that small percentage of blood draken save him?
Anyway thanks for such a good story, and I hope not too long to upload the next chapter

Wow, that was a hard chapter to read. Cried at the end. I would ask you to consider not letting Leolin pass but I am sure you have your mind set on where you want the story to go based on your author comments. I have more to say but as my grandmother said if you have nothing nice to say, do not say anything at all.

Ahhh. I thought when you wrote and Severs didn't wake again, it meant he slept through the night. I went back and reread it and I got it. Probably didn't read it that way because Snape is my favorite.

Not a fan of this one, you made me cry. Leo line is definitely my favorite or Harrys children and I really hope he gets better. But other than the tearfest, great chapter