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by Holly

person Shadow Summers
schedule August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
poor harry! that was soo cruel! i actually cried! I hope Fenrir will come to his senses and let Harry hold his twins. so sad.. *sobs*
person Helen
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much, I'm so glad that you decided to carry it on. I can't wait to read more.
person Myniephoenix
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I look for updates on this story every day just to be sure I dong miss it please dont keep us waiting long.
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, the plot is so refreshing and I look forward to updates!!!!
person Audrei
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The chapter it's so sad. fenrir so idiot and blind. I hope Harry does not try something stupid like kill himself.
Your story is great, and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent, much better than what I could have done. I can't wait for what happens next and for what their punishment is going to be. Update soon.
person JtheChosen1
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't leave us with THIS!!!!! Such a cliffhanger! Gah!!!! Please comeback ASAP and write out the pack's punishment, especially Fenrir's. I feel terrible for Harry, and even bad for the children because they'll never know a mother like Harry. Only the Healer and the apprentice should be spared from any punishment the wild/Harry deals out! Again come back soon, I can't wait for more!
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well good. He'll deserve whatever he gets for not bothering to find out the truth. I feel sorry for the rest of the pack though. I bet harry's cubs are going to be unmanageable and harry will likely go into depression.
person Rose
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG...and it stops there?!!!! Poor Harry, all that pain and no babies to cuddle afterwards?! Bad Alpha! I hope that the babies cry all night don't stop till they see their mommy, and yeah! Rawr! Anywho, thank you for writing a story that is just so engrossing it kept me in my bubble bath with my glass of wine for longer than i'd planned! lol... thanks for the good read! I will be impatiently awaiting more!

Love, and Cookies,

Rose
person KaylaAnn
schedule August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg omg... please update soon, that was so sad... I am literally in tears :(

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