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by WinterRaven

schedule August 31, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if I've reviewed this story yet, if not, I apologize. I do love it, despite the numerous terrible, yet fantastic, things that have happened.
Anyway, its your story and everything but I thought I would just share my feelings about this latest chapter (31, just to avoid later confusion.) The end of this chapter just had such a note of finality in it that, personally, I feel like this would be an excellent place to actually END this story and then continue in a sequel.
Again, your story, so you can do whatever you want with it. Just as long as you continue it, I'm happy. ^^
schedule August 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! I totally understand about the college thing! I'm starting back up next week, but I'm already not writing as much... which sucks, but I'll wait for your updates! good luck with school and writing :)
person Ataraxia
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
My heart leaps every time I see that you've updated your story. This is really well done, the plot is amazing. Whenever I see stories where Voldemort is still alive, I wonder what kind of plot device the author is going to use to defeat him. Asked and answered!
Once again, beautiful.
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I know, I've been gone. Had internet problems. *sigh*

I've a feeling Elisha did that to Dumbledore. And he made her. I keep thinking about him ordering Snape to be the one to kill him.....

And, Ooooh what a cliffie! Now I'm glad I had to wait to read. I'd of died. I'm very scared for them. I knew it was coming. Harry's mental state was so far gone.
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NNOOOOOO! I have no words. I have to go read the next chapter now.
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was heart breaking. brother and sister. I knew it, early on, I just couldn't work it out how. I thought maybe Severus and Lily...just, how did he end up with her? Poor Severus. Poor Harry. I knew she did Dumbledore, I was wrong about the reason, though. I hope you can post more soon. You planned her death from the beginning I imagine. Poor you! I can't imagine writing such depth and feeling into a character I knew I was going to have to sacrifice. God.
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
They were siblings?! Sucks that she had to sacrifice herself :( update soon.
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh Eli. Why is it ppl never think of what the emotional damage can do? If Har svives rthis will take him years to recover from... and Sanpe might not even want to survive,
person magentah
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aah! Horrible-fantastic twist! I'd considered it in the beginning and then just.. forgot. :) Thanks for sticking with this story and updating so frequently. It's great! Now I really can't wait for the next chapter.. I need to grieve for Elisha in company.
schedule August 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
God, I'm so addicted to this story. I've been reading it almost from the start, and I've been getting more and more hooked. It's amazing. You're amazing. I love it.

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