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schedule April 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I am disheartened that this story gets so little response, but I am confident that you will persevere and trod on, without the acclaim of your readers.
Take heart, my friend, your work speaks for itself.

Bob
schedule March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
a pretty light chappie as your wb. Still, it's interesting. I look forward to finding out what that cup was.
schedule December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i reckon tom would've been happier with out all these hints to a dark past hanging over his head. Interesting, would wizards know about molecules and such. They seem more the realm of muggle science.
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Please keep writing this one, it's got potential. I'd like to see what sort of challenges Tom has to face.
schedule July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
bump bum bum! Let's see how young mr Hershel handles being in slyth... is it me or is Dumbles already slightly biased?
i like how diplomatic tom is.
schedule June 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
interesting... Can't wait to see where it goes.
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think it's an alright story. The whole purpose of fanfic is "what if" so nothing is really farfetched.
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Pls keep it up. being somewhat out there is what AU's are all about... and I could see this. Hehe. Sev as Tom's kid, what a kicker. ^^
person kara
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yes please continue, it's very sweet so far.
person Shadow
schedule June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I loved this story, plausible, sometimes all it takes is a single change in a decision to make the world so a different course.

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