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August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really liked this last chapter. Though I enjoy the back-and-forth pushing and shoving between Harry and Draco, it's nice to see some progress ;)
especially liked the "you're mutilating yourself" and the mirror bit, it rings true beyond this story; sometimes you need someone to show you things you can't or don't want to see yourself. Really well done!
and I giggled a bit at Harry smugly thinking to himself that Draco finds the wings annoying as well sometimes when he tells him not to knock over anything.
Waiting for the next chapter :)
especially liked the "you're mutilating yourself" and the mirror bit, it rings true beyond this story; sometimes you need someone to show you things you can't or don't want to see yourself. Really well done!
and I giggled a bit at Harry smugly thinking to himself that Draco finds the wings annoying as well sometimes when he tells him not to knock over anything.
Waiting for the next chapter :)
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August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #13...
That was a nice ending to the chapter, no drama...just a
subtle/subdued atmosphere.
That was a nice ending to the chapter, no drama...just a
subtle/subdued atmosphere.
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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Man Harry is a jerk. This is one of the nicer versions of Malfoy you've written and Harry is pretty rude.
Interesting about the huge fire. Was Draco trying to subtlety make the room comfy or did he develop some sort of pyromania at some point lol.
Interesting about the huge fire. Was Draco trying to subtlety make the room comfy or did he develop some sort of pyromania at some point lol.
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August 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #12...
1. You know, I think I understand what Draco was trying to say.
In a way, Harry has always been the image/example Draco has
inspired or wanted to be, i.e better in quidditch, standing up
for what you truly believe in, etc..
Also, never give up, don't let the world get the best of you.
2. Well, despite what Harry thinks, Draco will get that privilege
of seeing Harry fly, as much as Draco hangs around him.
3. Oh, and another thing, if you somehow come up with a convincing
way of 'retracting wings into the pouches???' then you will DEFINITELY
be the shit, girl!
1. You know, I think I understand what Draco was trying to say.
In a way, Harry has always been the image/example Draco has
inspired or wanted to be, i.e better in quidditch, standing up
for what you truly believe in, etc..
Also, never give up, don't let the world get the best of you.
2. Well, despite what Harry thinks, Draco will get that privilege
of seeing Harry fly, as much as Draco hangs around him.
3. Oh, and another thing, if you somehow come up with a convincing
way of 'retracting wings into the pouches???' then you will DEFINITELY
be the shit, girl!
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I luffffffs your use of language, even if i did have to go and look up a couple of words. >> being someone elses drive and motivation without even knowing it, what an interesting idea. I wouldn't say he's Draco's inspiration because the word has to many positive connotations and dooesn't quite fit. It's close though. Pouches, fleshy sheaths for his wings, what a great idea.
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August 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love where this i going but i'm really not sure why Harry is being so callous and aweful to Draco. It's like the more honest and heartfelt Draco is, the more vicious and hurtful Harry becomes. I don't get why.
anyway, get writing. the idea is inspired.
anyway, get writing. the idea is inspired.
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August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:D Great as always, I can't wait to see what will happen ^^
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August 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #11...
Damn, I thought there'd be more butt-kissing
from Harry. :-)
Btw, what inspired this theme for the story?
Damn, I thought there'd be more butt-kissing
from Harry. :-)
Btw, what inspired this theme for the story?
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August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this story!
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August 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked Draco's reaction to Harry's apology. :)