rate_review Reviews

Hi,

just dropping a line to say that I'm really enjoying your story so far.
I'm very intrigued by your character description, it's quite unusual imho, everyone seems to have hidden depths and layers which makes the whole thing so interesting. Rape fics aren't actually my cup of tea but I couldn't stop reading here, so well done! (that sounds wrong somehow but be assured it's a compliment, yeah? :)) Your writing style flows and what can I say, it's just really enjoyable.
Hope you're gonna continue with this to whatever ending you've imagined. Can't wait for the next part, thanks for entertaining me so far :)

M

more please!! good stuff

I've just read the first three chapters and I could see such potential from the first chapter on it's own, I am so happy you chose to continue! I can't wait to see what happens next :D
Best Wishes
Shigure-san
x chuu x

oh yeah, he's sooooooooooooo going to be seeing Malfoy again. I curiose to, what HAS Malfoy been doing?

That chapter was such a tease! I wanted more so much more in it. It was a little strange how Malfoy and Potter meet again but I can sorta see that happening. I felt the conversation between Draco and Harry was weird and a little hard to follow with the whole Blaise thing. I mean I get that in the first chapter Harry had thought about the rumors that maybe that wasn't Draco's first time with a guy and that he might have been dating Blaise at Hogwarts, but that's still not even confirmed. Was Harry Draco's first time or not? Did Draco and Blaise ever date? I'm just confused but I still want to follow this through because the first chapter was so amazing and the second was a great follow up because it got us past the war and gave us something better and more than J.K.'s silly epilogue.Also you could see that Harry probably would sit through all those trials and how he could have those feelings towards the Malfoys. I was waiting for this chapter but now I'm on edge for the next chapter. I'm wondering what Draco has been doing all this time. Like what the wizard society would let him get hired as. It would be cool if with all the Arors leaving Draco would be recruited and become Harry's new partner so they would have to see each other every day and Harry would have to fight his attraction. But that's just one scenario I see in my head that could happen with your story but I can't wait to see what you write about.

I love your story so much! I could actually see that happening as an alternate story. Please keep continuing I really look forward to reading more. Your story is really well written and I feel you have a great grasp on the characters. Your new fan CJB.

I'm so glad that you decided to continue this at the point where Harry had won. I read the first chapter yesterday, and it left me feeling bothered. It was a very haunting image to be left with. I'll be looking forward to future chapters. Nicely done ^_^

I am so excited for this story, I feel like it has the potential to be one of those really angsty slow-burns that I love. Can't wait for more!

well, i can say that worked nicely.

oh! i'm excited to hear that this will not remain a one shot. The second chapter was touching...I cant wait to see what your story will be leading up to.