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What was it? I soooo need to know! Who sent it?

So I feel like a giant d-bag because I hadn't realized that the story was still a WIP when I started. I feel extra silly, because I, of course, have had many a reaction over the past 40+ chapters.

Like Harry's and Severus' relationship? GUH. So much love!

I don't think I've ever read a Veela fic quite as beefed up as yours. I totally appreciate you holding off on the smut until the full inheritance (mostly because each and every sceneis fantastic - PS the threesome in WiitbN was GOLD).

Even Havanism is awesome! When I saw the starting note, I was sure it was going to be a bust, but it's beautiful and I loved the scant scenes where he was doing his prayers. (And I love your sensitivity to other religions. Plenty of respect for you for that.)

The only thing I don't totally adore are the visions... I see their uses and such, and I guess the frustration is suitable considering Harry's position in the visions (the spectator rather than participant.

On the whole, A+!

They're so much going on, I can't comment on it all!! But that classroom scene, whew!! And I'm so happy Harry is so loved and has self respect that he isn't even thinking twice about ripping up that letter. Snape and Harry are so sweet to each other <3

eeeeeeeeeeeppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp!!
Love it, but when is Severus gonna find out about Draco and Harry.
Or dose he already know.
did Draco tell Lucius?
di Lucius tell Severus?
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeepppppppppppppppppppppppppp!!
I wana know, i wana know.
update soon, plz, u fabulous author.
(eeeeeeeeeepppppppppppppp!!)

I love how Severus is so protective of his son. HOpe more is to come soon please.

poor harry & draco to be apart for 2 months. makes me wonder what & who the letter was from.

drats, i missed a chappie and it was one with lots of review bait too.

boooo. remi resigned... i suppose it's not unexpected, it just sucks. >> The whole potion question was explained too. i'm glad he and har... and violet mended fences. jonny boy though is a lost cause and no great loss. i reckon he might be just a wee bit uncertain about himself and jealous too, since his 'rents will be focusing their attention on har... does that mean har is potter heir or just an unacknowledged child... since, despite his parents being married now, he's technically a bastard and that'd make dear jonny the legitimate first son. Jonny's position is threatened even though har has no interest atm. arrigant little oik that he is though, i'm sure he'll twist it into poor poor pitiful me.

I'm glad ron apologized, thought i can why he'd want to keep peace with a dorm mate and he didn't have much in common with mio anyway. hanging with older people mio might actually be communicating with people more on her level. really, trying to slow her mental levels to jonny boy and rons levels was probably holding her back some, though she'll miss the bond they had. I wonder how ron and jonny will cope on their own. will the even want to stumble into things the way they were as i'm stills sure mio was the brains of the outfit.

d'aawwwww. the boys are sooooooooo cute together ! *squeeeees. how is it none of draco's slyth friends have picked up on his changed attitude. i mean, they gotta know by now he's not putting out or picking up anyone anymore?

The potter parents have a lONG way to go before har is anywhere near ready to spend time with him. events might speed up the process but until then... *shrugs.

i look forward to the chaos likely to happen at the match and i wonder if mio gets to crush on Krum this time around. after all, hey, she's free now yeah?

Even though har apologized, i hope he remembers this in future. Sev is always, ever and only looking out for him.

anywho, moving on. snickers 'Har and Draco, sitting it a tree. K I S S I N G... first comes love, then comes....' owwwwie. stupid broken branch. *pouts.

seriously, what WAS Draco thinking? once again d'awwwwwww. har is sooooo sweet. he always wants to give back usually even before he's given in the first place.

awwww, i think it's really cute that sev is relaxed enough around har to tease him. sev never really gives that impression otherwise, he's such formal person.

hmmm, i know draco really needs to learn this stuff, but wow, if events fall out ANYTHING like they did in the canon, good luck prying him from har's side ever again. the fathers aren't in on their kids 'mates to be' status yet are they?

heh, snarky Luc is snarky.

So, the rat manged to locate V after all, though i'm guessing he kept his attempt on hars life to himself. poor old muggle bloke. sucks to be him huh. at least they take har's dreams seriously now.

awwww, Sev is such a good papa.

Well sheesh. how to wreck the b day feeling there V. a Birthday gift/greeting for V... oh that is just too creepy for words. *shivers along with har at the feeling of foreboding on the horizon.

Gosh John Potter is such a freaking twat!!! I'm glad that Ron apologised but poor Hermione - please give her some nice girls to hang out with, boys are stupid. I'm also glad that Harry and Remus are kind of friends, he always was the most sensible Marauder. Also I love Harry's loyalty to Serverus it's just such a touching thing to see, well read anyway. A lovely chapter and whoooo for hormones oh yeah ;) I wonder how the world cup is going to go, obviously Lucius won't be running around with the death eaters, can't wait to see what you do!

I love this story! I have read every chapter as soon as it came out and liked every one of them. The pacing of your story is great and I love that you are consistent in your updates, it makes it so much more enjoyable. Your writing lets you really connect with the characters. I'm glad that Harry isn't going to spend the holidays with the Potters yet. After what they put him through, they will definitely have to work to be able to be on good terms with him. I love how loyal he is to his family: Severus, Lucius, and Draco. By the way, that little scene between him and Draco was very much appreciated! It's been awhile since they've had any time together. Anyways, can't wait for next week's update!

Harry doesn't need to visit witht he potters. He is fine with Severus, Lucius, and Draco, that's all the family he needs period.

Kinda sounds like the potters want to be with Harry cuz he is the boy who lived. And thats all they want him for. Hope Harry sticks to his guns