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I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter.

why it is a intresting story, funny how hermoen think the boys are going to judge her, and they dont care about her when they do, i have to ask who is the couple going to be. hope ron and hermoine

good, if looking for ideas, have draco me nice to ron and harry, please dont have ron a jerk again, it get old, and let harry adn ron have the power to deal with draco dad, so he has to make a chooice lose his daughter or lose his life.

I love this story so far, it is so well handled, but I do believe she would get a little more freaked out when it fully hits her. And of course you could so have Ron end up being a dick and breaking up with her.

Very good start. Can't wait to see where you take this. I had a friend like Ron that would decide who and what I should have in my life. Luckily, I did not have to deal with a Harry that was always defending (in spite of it all, I usually did the defending). Knowing that the Malfoys share a similar background through magic, it would be a shame for Hermione to go to them too quickly and leave those who took care of her and loved her behind. Looking forward to more. p

you could do somethink different and have ron be the good one and harry be the jerk.

I love the idea for this story :) quick question...does Hermione have a glamor over her or is her appearance going to be different from Draco's? Can't wait for the next chapter :)

The concept is interesting but the chapter felt rushed. This is the type of story that needs to have a certain amount of emotional depth and a tight plot. There a lot of questions that needed to be answered with forethought and planning. I hope you can succeed.

btw, you could use a beta.