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March 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet
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August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cute, although Severus apparently has the patience of a saint. If my dead best friend had harassed me like that, no matter how good of a cause I doubt I would ever forgive them. but hey it worked and it was cute. ^_^
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, a mum setting her childhood bff up with her kid from beyond the grave... that's out there AND you made it work. I'm impressed. I don't know what you've been feeding your plot bunnies on but please keep it up. ^^
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, that was awesome! I love the idea of Lily's spirit guiding Severus on the right path, that's a really bitter-sweet idea. And I'm glad there was no sex, wouldn't have fitted it really.
On a less gushy, let's-talk-about-your-writing way, I really like your style and I never found myself thinking that it was repetitive. My enjoyment of your story was greatly increased by your technique. I hope you keep writing because I think you have some talent ^^
On a less gushy, let's-talk-about-your-writing way, I really like your style and I never found myself thinking that it was repetitive. My enjoyment of your story was greatly increased by your technique. I hope you keep writing because I think you have some talent ^^