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December 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, totally I love the story so far, but I have to tell you that your grammar needs work. That isn't a flame or a dig at you. Nor is it me trying to point out how perfect my own grammar is. You might consider getting a beta reader. It could help you out so much and make this story, which is great to begin with, even better.
THERE--it is referring to place such as, "We are going over THERE."
THEY'RE--Is the contraction for the words THEY ARE
I hope this helps you out. Thanks for sharing and please update soon.
THERE--it is referring to place such as, "We are going over THERE."
THEY'RE--Is the contraction for the words THEY ARE
I hope this helps you out. Thanks for sharing and please update soon.
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December 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aw that was sweet. Quik update too. Thank you for that. Please update again soon.
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December 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!! I was so glad to see an update for this story!!! :)
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December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
thank you for finally updating this story i love it!!
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December 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay an update. I am glad she told them but now I am worried. She needs space? I guess after all that and telling her friends, that would be hard to deal with. I hope more is to come soon. I have been waiting for an update and now that I got one I am sated...for the moment. But I will wait patiently.
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December 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I saw you left a message on koolgirl18's story, time to update yours!!!! I am trying to be paitent but it is soooo hard. Pleeasseee moooorrre!!!
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December 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it's been over 2 months. I NEED more. NEED, not want, NEED!!!! Please?!
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November 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Could use a few spelling and grammar fixes, but altogether amazing. Please update soon. I will be on the edge of my seat.
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November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
As far as I can tell the only way to favorite a story is to bookmark it in your browser.
Please update soon *begs* PLEASE
You have developed this story so well I am excited for what comes next.
Please update soon *begs* PLEASE
You have developed this story so well I am excited for what comes next.
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October 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow I lOve this story! I love the soulmate idea I love the progression of their relationship and I absolutely LOVE the panther! My only problem is that I'm new to this site and I have no idea how to favorite this story or get an email alert for when it's updated because I really want to keep reading it. HELP! lol anyways I love it and I hope to read mOre soon. Thanks
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