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Thank you for telling me! I'm going to hop right over to FF and put this on my alerts list! :D

So far so good :) It's hard to write sth more substantial as the story is in its infancy; however, I like te beginning and am intrigued by the plot. You could work a little on your style, but that's exactly what writing is for, isn't it? :) I just hope you won't abandon the story. And that it won't turn into some kind of orgy, where everybody does everybody (unfaitfulness doesn't do it to me, it's very off-putting). Take care!

So far I've really been enjoying this! I was wondering if you had a FF account? I'd like to be able to put this story on my Alerts list.

Wow, issues much indeed. Still, you'd think ppl would know by now the whole 'make em jealous' thing rarely works. So poor, messed up, confused Har is gay with a touch of bi on the side huh. I wonder how he and Sev will end up in the sack together.