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October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, absolutely loved it. I'm still laughing.
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August 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very cute idea, and I love the interaction between Lucius and Narcissa, how they hunger for one another.
If I may make a suggestion:
You have a tendency to put one character's reaction at the end of the other character's statement. For example: