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for Chameleon's Song

by SomethingElse

schedule December 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
well, that was less painful than i thought it would be... i'm glad har is relatively fast on the up take. Not many of his mates would stand for being walked over... if any. it figures Ron would get it wrong and overcompensate. I just hope he learns before he crushes all the life and fire out of his wife.

with as many mates as har has, i think make it up as they go along is the only path they can take. flexibility is a must.
whoa, weasley and malfoy, meeting without total bloodshed. heh, molly's going to have a cow. ^^

hang on, i'm a bit confused. was fleur a triplet? or did luc have another set of twins immediately after and both died? oh, it must be heartbreaking to know there are high odds of losing your kids. Does har know? draco's pretty high maintenance as is, if he were to lose his kids... *shakes head. maybe bill can help out being a curse breaker and all.

so, every weasley baby has the chance of being either twins or merge twins? speaking of which... sigh, next time you want something you two, just freaking ask him huh?
schedule December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
please finish this great story
person Gobert
schedule December 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hiya - so happy you're back! Loving the chapter - especially Isabel ripping Harry a new one...and those twins - will they have two each??? Three sets of twins??? They're going to need more elves!

Still lovin' my Draco - soaking in the love and pampering! Glad Harry came to his senses and also the way each creature has different needs.

And again - Fred and George - what are you going to do next??? Take care - Gobert

person AR
schedule December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Leave it to the twins to figure out a way towards getting what they want. Surprised about the news with Charlie...will be interesting to see if he can split himself, as suggested, although it does add an amusing tilt towards his chosen career--fire breathing dragons. [snorts] Ron's bloody annoying... Hope he's able to get his act together real quick. Poor Bill, though--bit of a shock, that. Did wonder what happened to the other "twins" since we're only aware of Gabrielle, Draco, and Fluer.

Looking forward to a new home--shame there isn't something else in the Potter or Black portfolios. Something nice and big and spacious--plenty of room for all those bitty beasties that'll be running amock. Question--Draco will always have twins, granting they both survive (why is their survival rate so low again? Sure that could be tied in narratively with pregnant hormonal worries). Will Fred and George have twins each or each have one, thereby having twins because in essence they are already one....? I'm trying to remember the story facts now and if those three are the only ones in danger of multiple births... Sphinx? Manticore? And there's the gestestion rate to worry about, too. Not fun having either a lot of pregnant blokes moaning and groaning about at the same time or a lot of little infants/toddlers running around at the same time.

The new home would need not only a good bucketfull of protective wards and whatnot, but also a good-sized pond or mini-lake, a sizable forest, some ramparts and balconies, a comfy cavern or cubby hole... Maybe near the cliffs along the seashore...? Secret passages that lead down to a strip of beach or open right out of the cliff face to the open sea....

Do feel a little bit bad for Harry, struggling to do what's right and not lose himself in this whole new world of being he's found himself in. On the other hand, it should be kind of nice for him to realize he's not that last "Potter", even if he's the only one with the last name... and now he'll be repopulating his family tree with at least a dozen kidlings. Hogwarts, watch out!

Hermione will make a great "aunty" to the brood, I think, but she really hasn't been set up as a mate-keeper in this story. Bit sad about that. Although, would love it if another of Harry's siblings should happen to pop up and take care of her baby-blues...quite enthusiastically and prolifically. Didn't she just meet up with a vampire a chapter ago....? Wonder how that would work? Although, I also did like a good Hermione paired with Severus, Sirius, or Remus, it just doesn't, again, feel right for this story.

What does feel right, although I'm still not sure if you're just teasing or if you'll really let it go that way, is Harry stealing Isabel away for his harem. Her family's stance on creatures, of course, makes that a difficult move, but they do seem rather great for each other--and not in the best friends way Hermione and Harry have going for them! I could just see them having a tea meeting, getting into an argument that leads to heavy snogging and mating before they regain their senses. Harry demanding she not try and marry any other male, insisting that if she had to marry, she should marry him. Her agonizing about how her family would never condone the arrangement.... But if she were to turn up pregnant, surely she would be disowned... and thus given leave to marry where she wills it. Unless they tried to kill her. :/ Urk. Bit troublesome that could be.

I enjoy the matings--especially when I'm a bit peckish. Could be a bit more graphic at times, but sometimes stories just won't allow themselves to be written that way, do they? [laughs]
person Jordan C
schedule December 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey just wanted to say how much I still love this story I've read it over 12 times now and I still am not tired of it.
Please tell me you plan to update soon.
person Gobert
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hiya
schedule August 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chap 23
Haha I agree with you actually. There is dominance and then there is bullying. There is a difference between the two. PLEASE UPDATE SOON I CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
schedule August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. I don't usually go for harem stories, but this one is good. Please write more soon.
person Jan
schedule August 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Go Draco! Don't let Harry tell you what to do! Please update chapter 24 soon.
schedule August 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi i'm soooooooooooo happy to see that your back and with an awesome chapter at that I can't wait till the next oooooooooooooooo such a cliffhanger Ron is being such a dick and so is Harry.

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