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I had no idea the prophecy would effect his magic THAT much! Nice chapter.

Another good chapter, prelude to the action hmm? Hermione seems to be a bit reserved when it comes to things that just have to be done. Tsk tsk, she should know better; how else is someone going to keep a threat contained unless you take away (albeit temporarily) the threat? Can't wait to read the next chapter, all the action. ^.^ I await the next chapter.

Leania

har might be a brilliant theorist and spell crafter /adaptor but i think he'd wither with out a chance for action of some kind. If he wasn't an auror he'd be a duelist or a body guard or something else that requires decisive action... i think auror suits him well and it gives the authority he needs. there's enough time to become a noted spell crafter when he retires.
meantime, oh, i am looking forward to the fight scene.

I LOVE LOVE LOVE that they are now linked and Harry can hear Draco's thoughts. Ecstatic is more like it. Those first thoughts that Harry heard were just perfect. 'More than he deserved' and 'mine'... I loved those. Needy and possessive and I think Harry will respond to that and connect more with Draco making Draco more important to him and give him someone else to focus on rather than being obsessed with his work. I think it will help balance Harry. LOVE THIS!!!

Yay another chapter ^.^ So Draco got to see Harry create the Blood Bubble, and Draco took the potion. So both having taken the potion, would they get to share a type of mental conversation based upon the thoughts one receives from the other, and respond in turn? I wonder how Adam will respond to the Blood Bubble, seems he would be very cautious if he's been wary of magic thus far.
Keep up the good work, I await the next chapter.

Leania

#29...

Well, It's about time...I thought you would not eeeeverrr set it up
where the idea of the mind link going both ways would come about.

I, personally, thought Harry was at a disadvantage as time went on,
whenever Draco was privy to his thoughts & the fact it WOULD help during
extreme situations. Now, it seems like such a beautiful thing to happen
between them, no matter what the reason for it in the beginning.

I adore this story. I had a long weekend but it wasn't long enough and just stayed up all night to finish what you have so far. This story has so much detail, plot and depth... I just love everything about it. Their personalities and how they interact with each other is so realistic and I love how Malfoy was able to see those surface emotions and thoughts that Harry had and how they were so often opposite of how Harry appeared.

I must admit though that I do hope they don't have to spend the rest of their lives in hiding. Their memories alone should be enough proof that those men are guilty and that Harry has been doing the kind of work he's supposed to be doing. I hope the ministry plays it off like he was undercover or something. But as long as they end up together I'll be happy :)

now this promises to be very interesting. I find myself absolutely hanging for the next chappie. i want to see this plan in action.

Interesting so far; Blood Bubble hmm, sounds a bit dangerous. I can't wait for the next chapter, so glad you're still updating.

Leania

about #28...

Wow! I don't know about Ron, but I'm feeling a bit smarter just from reading this. O___O
Who knew I'd be learning something today! That was very informative!

..and no wisecracks from the peanut gallery.

Anyway, I won't come down on Draco on how he feels, because people are just like that. You
have some who care too much & those who only DO care about the immediate people around them, it's
human nature.