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about #22...

1. I must ask at this point, when will H & D share a
MORE intimate 'moment'?

2. I noticed you are really getting into the titles
with 'In...' in it. What brought that on?

I had to read the last chapter in two parts! I loved when Draco was getting blood from Ron-- the writing was very intense there. Had to walk away from it mentally after he managed the teleport. Had to do that again when Harry and Draco kissed, but that was because I'd forgotten the kid was in an alcove and was caught between elation at them finally kissing, etc.., and the little flailing part in the back of my mind that thought the kid was probably staring with huge eyes and little comprehension. At least he only saw rainbow colors and heard a lot of really interesting noises, like crunches and screams and whooshes and then moans and a lot of calm chatting. I'm worried about Draco being so pale afterward though, but he's been a little more accepting of the emotional aspects of dealing with Harry, so maybe just hates himself a bit for how easily Harry stood up and started rushing around in business mode afterward? Still loving the story!

OH my god! Please update soon! I have to know what happens next! I literally just stayed up from 11pm to 3:15 am to read all the way up to this and I wanna know about the boy speaking parseltongue and more about harry's mind.
I really love the way it's in just basic words that Malfoy is hearing Harry's thoughts and impulses. It seems primal to me and I like it. I also really like the way that Harry is so dark in this. Like he's not the naive little kid we all knew in the books.
Please update soon! Also just a request but could we see herminone alittle more? I just like her character as a big sister kind of thing to harry.
Anyways I love this storry update soon please!

well, that was interesting. I wonder what they'll do with the kid now. I wonder, if Har had never gone to Malfoy, would the prediction have come to pass?

You're welcome. As usual good chapter, though of course it went by much too quickly. Poor Draco, his first sexual experience with Harry, and not only does his face get bloodied but it's under those circumstances. I can't wait until the next chapter, keep up the fantastic work.


I also hope there won't be another cliffhanger next chapter..

Wow!

That was massive, and scary.

And a parseltongue surprise right at the end.

I really can't wait to se how this will continue!

Well fuck is right. Holy cow this was a great chapter! I have no other words to describe it. You've left me speechless. It was incredible. Damn girl... I need more. And now. LOL

wow... just.. wow... You litterally have me one the edge of my seat with this story. I absolutely love it! Oh, and would you mind if I quote you on something?
"Live with a storm most of your life, and you get so used to it that you don't remember what it's like when it's not raining."
I don't know how you did it but I believe you have done something I have tried to accomplish my entire life... One simple way to explain my ADHD to people...
But no, seriously, I love the story, can't wait to see more of it^^ keep it up!

about #21...

Whoa...talk about not holding back. You know, it's
always good to see Harry cut loose, as long as he
doesn't become a loose cannon & I must admit the
hotness of the latter chapter was spot on.

You rock, my dear! :-)

Now, we have a twist in the story... :-/

Whoa. I didn't expect Draco and Harry to have their fist sexual contact under THOSE circumstances. I also didn't expect Draco to be able to calm him down at all. Excellent update!