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update soon i can't wait when hermione come to the malfoy house and get her things and what draco will say about her being pregnant love this story

Aww, poor Mione. *smh* If Draco really is cheating then he's a huge ass, and I hope Hermione takes him for everything he's worth...unfortunately that wont happen.

This is really good
update more often so i can get my fix ;)

Love it!

Poor Hermione, although I am rather anxious to hear Draco's side of things.

Oh my goodness!!! I knew it!!!!! Will this be updated anytime soon!!!??! I gotta see what happens next!!!

Poor Hermione, hope things turn around soon.

This is very interesting so i love to read more. Please make it a longer update next time. Thanks!

update soon can't wait what draco does in trying to find hermione and finding out she is pregnant

more more more. Sorry but i am EAGERLY waiting for your next update.

Interesting premise, and a story that I would likely be attracted to. Unfortunately, I will not continue reading this work because there are so many errors in grammar and punctuation that it is distracting (and detracting) from what could be a good tale. I found more than a dozen errors in just the first handful of sentences, including capitalization ("Husband" is only capitalized if it is the first word in a sentence, which would be odd, or on some kind of engraving as a title), misuse of commas and semicolons, improper dialogue punctuation, paragraph spacing problems, incomplete sentences, etc. I would urge you to use a beta reader to help you improve your writing if you are serious about being a competent story-teller.