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March 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
blinks. okay, that's one hell of a kink in the works. how the hells bells are they sneak manwolf in. A nice bit of manipulation on Klein there btw. Har's Slyth tendencies are really coming to the fore and getting a good work out.
I'm glad Draco has at least one of his friends back, especially considering the way his ma essentially dumped him for his da. He misses them even more than he shows i think.
I'm glad Draco has at least one of his friends back, especially considering the way his ma essentially dumped him for his da. He misses them even more than he shows i think.
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March 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I see, very creative. So Draco now has one Slytherin friend back, lets see how long it takes for the others to slowly trickle back. Granted, Blaise my never be his friend again (that could always change, but I'm sure he'd be the last), but others may give him a second chance. Okay, so the wolfwere is going with them to Azkaban? Curious to see how the pups are tied into this mess Lucius has created. I don't think there's any saving Narcissa, and I'm still curious about that harp/Blood magic bit. Perhaps I have to go back and re-read a chapter or two, unless you haven't covered it yet.
Thanks for the explanation, now it makes sense. Another wonderful chapter, looking forward to the next!
Leania
Thanks for the explanation, now it makes sense. Another wonderful chapter, looking forward to the next!
Leania
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March 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! The wolfwere is going to muck things up! Great update.
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March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ha! They pulled a Crouch!(sort of.)
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February 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So Lucius is the leader and he's insane, but what of Narcissa?
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February 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
about # 30...
Well, got ourselves a wee bit of a twist in ze plot, ya? :-)
Veddy interesting, it almost feels like a mystery. Speaking
of mystery, when was the last time you did a story that had a
REAL mystery in it...you know where we would have to guess
who done it?
Another thing, too bad this isn't a two parter..because that wolfwere
has become interesting, he really needs more 'airtime' in the story
or a sidestory.
..and last, the drama in this story flows nicely, it gets more edgier
as time goes on.
Well, got ourselves a wee bit of a twist in ze plot, ya? :-)
Veddy interesting, it almost feels like a mystery. Speaking
of mystery, when was the last time you did a story that had a
REAL mystery in it...you know where we would have to guess
who done it?
Another thing, too bad this isn't a two parter..because that wolfwere
has become interesting, he really needs more 'airtime' in the story
or a sidestory.
..and last, the drama in this story flows nicely, it gets more edgier
as time goes on.
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February 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
... so much for loose ends being tied up. these are the sort of loose ends that comes back to smack you in the face.
So basically, both draco's parents are nutters now and they split their time, half in the clink, half out. So that really was Luc in the forest of dean.
and now har needs to look for a post cognetic spell as well, never let it be said har's life is slow and boring. :P
I wonder if he could transfer some of the stuff he's learning across to helping find mio's parents.
will har go share his new knowledge of luc and cissa with Klein and the aurors or do something else. I can't wait to find out.
So basically, both draco's parents are nutters now and they split their time, half in the clink, half out. So that really was Luc in the forest of dean.
and now har needs to look for a post cognetic spell as well, never let it be said har's life is slow and boring. :P
I wonder if he could transfer some of the stuff he's learning across to helping find mio's parents.
will har go share his new knowledge of luc and cissa with Klein and the aurors or do something else. I can't wait to find out.
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February 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like Narcissa did something very stupid. Great update!
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February 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah I found this story again, I've been caught up in a long one these past few days. So what spell is this that Mrs. Narcissa Malfoy used? Sounds like something akin to a split existance. Is it actually 2 different...err...persons...err...like the original and a clone, or is it a way for Lucius to be in two different places like a soul travel? Congrats, I think you made my brain fry and melt, LOL!! Good to see Draco getting his spirit (a.k.a. spunk) back and not be such a...limp noodle. I await the next!
Leania
Leania
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February 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! I loved the conversation between Snape and Harry. It truly shows that he's actually seeing Harry as he is, instead of like he's only James's son. Bravo! And as for the Slytherins and Draco, if he only gets Goyle back, then that should be enough, I suppose. Blaise seems to be extremely reluctant to even try to come to terms with what happened and just wants to blame and hate Draco. As for Daphne, I'm not so sure about her. And I *am* curious about Theo's reaction as well, since you didn't mention it at all. Do we get to see what Pansy has been up to since the last time the boys saw her? And thanks for the late birthday wishes! <3