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January 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
No way! You've got to give us more! What a cliffhanger!
It was hot. I liked Hermione's inexperience, and Ginny's experience. Yummy! Please finish this fic?
It was hot. I liked Hermione's inexperience, and Ginny's experience. Yummy! Please finish this fic?
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September 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm not going to leave a 'ZOMG THAT WAS GOOD PLS CONINU' review, so:
I very much enjoyed the story :)
The description was good. Hermione's thoughts were written well. I liked their conversation. It all seemed very natural.
It read very well, unlike the greater majority of stories on the site :)
There seems to be a bit of contradiction here (or it just needs to be disambiguated):
'"I know that everyone assumed that Krum and I
I very much enjoyed the story :)
The description was good. Hermione's thoughts were written well. I liked their conversation. It all seemed very natural.
It read very well, unlike the greater majority of stories on the site :)
There seems to be a bit of contradiction here (or it just needs to be disambiguated):
'"I know that everyone assumed that Krum and I