rate_review Reviews

let me guess ron going to be a jerk,,like he is in every story. dont know why people have to write him that way.
he a good guy

Poor Hermione. Hope things work out. If a guy I like doesn't show any interest in me I don't sweat it and move on. But I hope she makes him jealous cuz if he can't realize how special she is then he isn't worth it. Update again soon please.

Very nice chapter! Poor Hermione. I hope that everything works out.

I like this story and I am looking forward to reading more of it please update when you can.

ooh ooh love it

Hard to believe Snape would dance. But good update. Hope to see more soon.

Awsome (wonder whose at the door?) =)

Interesting. Wonder what happened. Update again soon please and I will return. :)

I have to admit from your authors note at the end of chapter one(I think)it sounded like it would be a bash on Ron story - you just sounded so happy that his name wasn't listed it came off as a preparation for Ron Bash 2011. Which I do not particularly enjoy, I think it's a plot point that's WAY overused, and so try to avoid those stories. However, I decided to give it a couple more chapters, probaly to wait until Severus was introduced to decide whether to continue or not.

I hate A/N's. Unless they are to translate a language that I don't speak into one that I do or to explain some historical or literary reference that the reader may not be familiar with I usually skip them(I have written this particual part of my review about eight times and this is what I am going to stick with, I really hope this whole thing doesn't come across as mean spirited - because I really don't mean any of it that way. Just giving my opinion and what I hope is some constructive criticism). For some reason authors like to put spoilers into their A/N's and it bugs me a little. Of course, I am now assuming that Ron is dead - I suppose it's possible that Lucius just can't bear to spit out the name of a Weasley...

Ah well, guess I'll just have to keep reading, then.

I'm willing to give it a bit more, but I am not a huge fan of the super short chapters, I usually don't read anything with less than 1000 words/chapter. Personally, I'd rather wait a week between updates and be able to read something more substantial - however, I understand that some people enjoy a different style.

Other than the above things, I think your story is well written and has the start of a good plot. I look forward to your next chapter.

Snape arrives I'm guessing