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by benzor88

person Dee
schedule November 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
What is your native language? And have you ever considered having someone read for accuracy in English before you publish your stories?
schedule November 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, dear, this latest chappie was hard to read. It was like a testament to bad grammar and wrong tense words used. Unbated I'm guessing?
person TomOfDC
schedule October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked it except I would prefer to have no Viktor Krum in this story. Ron and Hermione is good enough, so I just skipped any words of Viktor in the story.

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