rate_review Reviews

Amazing, the perfect tale of love, lust and obsession. The story is mainly Smut yet you still manage to weave an incredible plot! You are a wonderfull writer! You should really take pride in your writing, because you reserve it

Terrific story and I'm going to look up your teaser for your new "Altered State" story.

Hot stuff.

Lovely

i loved this story, i didn't want it to end!!

Absolutely loved your story.

I loved this story start to finish. I'm putting it in my Recommended reading because it's too good to lose track of. ^_^ and thanks for the preview chapter I must say it looks awesome. any if you're keeping up the kin then I am keeping up the reading. ^_^

That sex scene was SO hot with the right amount of fluff. GUHH!! I thought I was going to explode reading that. I love what Snape's other tattoo ended up being. I can't wait for this new story. That scene was worth the wait! Again, Guhhhh! You've teased me, but now you must deliver!

I wish you didn't end the story!!! Please change your mind and keep writing more for this!!!

I've really been enjoying the story so far. It's rare these days that a Snarry holds my attention for more than a chapter or two. Kudos to you for that! I love the BDSM them and the OFC Vivienne is a wonderful addition. She seems slightly on the Mary Sue side to me, but not in a way that becomes annoying.

I have one matter to point out, though, and I hope you will see it as a help and not a flame.

A sentence contains a subject *and* verb. It must have both. A good one-third of your "sentences" are missing one or the other. In my opinion, it slows down the flow of the story, making it feel choppy in a start-stop-start again manner.