rate_review Reviews

This is so delicious. I beg for more!

Great story :) I think you did an excellent job, and your grammar/spelling is virutally perfect. It's clear you put a lot of effort into the fic and I enjoyed your writing style a lot. I look forward to reading more from you in the future! I also liked the pairing and admitedly (and guiltly) liked the chan XD I would maybe recomend a tad more detail/length in future, nothing extreme as your writing is already superb, but perhaps a little more on the yaoi parts.

snickers... poor sev. innocent har could tempt a saint.

*dies laughing* oh, poor sev, he's sunk