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Four/Five: I thought Xander's recovering from a head wound happened much to quickly, even with magic. Poppy would have never let him leave the hospital after only an hour of being healing. He should have been in the hospital for a few days. It's a bit careless considering that, although things seemed fine at the moment, they could have deteriorated in a few hours. Xander should have still been exhausted on his birthday.

There's something off with Hermione and Blaise's emotions. They aren't coming across well. I felt more genuine emotion from Draco (his hateful stares and comments) than from either of them.

It's difficult for me to find the chapter five plausible because of the severity of Xander's head wound. That said, I do like that Hermione is willing to let Blaise be apart of their son's life because she knows it's what he needs.

Three: I like the Draco is marrying someone very down to earth. I'm a dramione fan, but I can appreciate both characters in relationships with others.

Blaise seemed fine, I could already tell he was Alex's father.

Poor baby, curiosity almost killed the little Slytherin.

One: You have a good eye for detail. I enjoyed your prose, I thought they flowed very well.

I like that you didn't go with the standard Harry/Ginny pairing it gets boring after a while, and I really like Luna. I also love the twist of Ginny cheating on Harry with Pansy.

I can't accept Fred's death either, so I'm glad his still alive.

Thanks for sharing.

ARE YOU ALIVE?
But seriously. The story is fantastic.

well done

I am not sure I would want to see him if I was pissed at him.

i am really enjoying this story...i love a good Blaise and Hermione story and this one is one of the best I have read...loved this chapter and can't wait to see how she handles the family

still lovin' it!

love the story so far i just found the story like today, well yesterday now, and i love it!!! :) i cant wait to see what will happen now! i bet it will be great! i will be watching and waiting for more! and i also do hope that you have lots planned for the story and that you will not end it soon or too quickly either! :) dont disapot us by not posting on monday or i might have to hurt you... give lots more, then even more, well you get the idea. :)

So, I will admit, I am completely addicted. I love your writing, the only thing that I'm a little iffy on is how quickly Blaise and Hermione seem to be falling back into what I assume are old patterns. I feel as if Hermione should fight it some more, but hey, you're the writer. You know what you're doing. Please, continue.