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person Frosty
schedule March 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
*fingers crossed* As terrifying as I find them (they're so BIG), I hope your horse is okay! Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, it's not a reflection of the direction of the story but the amount of work I've been having to do. I never, ever want to write another essay again. Ever. I loved this chapter! I particularly enjoy how you can tell the war is taking it's toll on everyone. A lot of people seem to gloss over how traumatising everything is and have them all living happily as if nothing bad were happening. I like that you can tell your characters are damaged by everything, but they're still fighting to make everything good again... if that makes any sense. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon?

~Frosty
person Kimbovet
schedule March 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! Absolutely loved the suspension scene! Can't wait to see what you do to Umbridge in this story. Hope your horse gets better. - Kim
schedule March 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh No!!! Your poor horse! ='( My horses are my babies and I know how it feels. Fingers & toes crossed for her =)
schedule March 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Loved the banter!
person Alice
schedule March 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'm going on a trip tomorrow, were leaving early and coming back late. I was wondering, could you update within the next 9 hours? I will repay you with cyber hugs and reviews? :D (my phone blocks this site because I won't pay to prove I'm over 18 -_-)
person Alice
schedule March 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ah I needed that update! As the reviews are your fix, the chapters are mine :D I cant wait for the next step, hope it doesn't take too long. Now off to do sme maths, take care & ta ta for now :-)
schedule March 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
ron could have been kill becouse he did not wake up, all becouse his friend drug him, and still lying to him again, and hermoine ask why he does not trust her, becosue she never stop lying.

ginny she seem to care more about draco, and snape then about her own family.
schedule March 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG Fantastic! Amazing! Want more!! Love what you did with the book and i was laughing with the whole 'Slytherins Rock'. I was also smiling and laughing when the two couples lit up the house! hahaha! that was fantastic! Looking forward to more!
person Kimbovet
schedule March 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a fast update! LOL! Poor Ron having to go through life knocked out. Is your version of Deathly Hallows going to go by quicker than JKR's? Most of the Horcruxes are taken care of & they have 2 of the 3 Hallows & know where the 3rd is. I just don't see them wandering around in the wilderness for months. Look forward to reading your take on Bill & Fleur's wedding.
schedule March 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, how you manage such long chapter is beyond me. I am truly amazed. The most I can get out is seven pages. Anyways, I positively love this story. It is so in depth and well thought out. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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