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for All Desire in a Day

by Lomonaaeren

schedule December 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This new Harry is disturbing. After he defeats Voldemort, he could go either way. Be an Auror or the next Dark Lord... Great update!
schedule December 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Even more furious? Poor Draco can hardly stand Malfoy and whats going on as it is. Seeing how this Harry is still friends with Ron and Hermione maybe he will get a beak and not have to see HarryxBlaise. More stupid Draco, it's funny how he finds this version of himself to be stupider, and obnoxious, when sometimes their thoughts coincide. He really was a little brat and it's a testament to how far he's grown that he can see that. You have been giving me a pseudo Christmas these past few days, new updates in something everyday is too good, you're going to spoil me. Out of all the upcoming chapters I am very curious as to how the sixth will turn out, especially with the whole sectumsempra business. Good chapter, this Draco is so hilarious in his interactions with Malfoy. I can't wait for a new update. Keep up the good work.

~Fullmoom
person Talltree-san
schedule December 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I guess young Malfoy is even more obsessed with Harry than Draco was in the past. Now he's like a creepy little stalker XD!
person SParker
schedule December 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
about #2...

That was interesting or I should say...it's interesting how you have
the future Draco participating by NOT participating, he's only an
observer. It feels like everything's in third person or 'fourth' person.

...annnd it's good to Harry hasn't lost that fighting spirit.
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Draco is such a fool. I knew this wouldn't happen the way he wanted it to. I just hope I am wrong in seeing a possible BlaisexHarry relationship forming in the future. I think it's funny that I read this now, when I was thinking about this same topic the night previous. I really enjoy how you portrayed Draco, his persona changes slightly in each story and I find this one to be one of the more unique counterparts. Him wanting to choke Malfoy is fabulously hilarious. As always, good job and I can't wait for the update. Even more with this actually as the tone is different.

~Fullmoon
person AlterEquis
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well maybe not a cliff but a hill for sure. But hillhanger has a different ring to it.

I was just really curious what was going to happen, still am. :)
person Talltree-san
schedule December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is definetly an interesting take of the Slytherin Harry story. Usually Draco goes back in time to right his wrongs to Harry to ensure that Harry choose Slytherin in the end. But you have it where the wrongs have already taken place, and Draco can't do anything about that...or anything at all for that manner. He is just an observer and all he can do is comment on his younger self's action like I'm commenting now. This really is quite a facinating story you have here :)!
person tiggator
schedule December 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great beginning. Honestly, I sometimes rarely look at the authors when I start a fic, just reading the summaries to get me started. Toward the end of this, all I kept thinking was... This is so good; I wonder if it's Lomonaaeren. And sure enough, it is. Your writing seriously always brings me in, even when I don't know it. How do you do it? LOL Love it. :)
schedule December 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is good, please continue.
person AlterEquis
schedule December 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Dear Mistress of Clifhangers,

Please don't let us dangle for to long.

Sincerely,

Curious Cat

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