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December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Filled with OCs, basic grammar mistakes, and spelling errors that even a casual reading of one's material before posting would have caught. I'm not sure if this story could have managed to fail harder.
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December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
mmm... At first I was hoping for a Ron-and-Harry makes their way trough all the Hogwarts female population... but this is only another Harry harem... a pity...
the sex? average, too 'standard' for my taste... the plot? a bit incoherent...
-This Harry is a total SOB (and a suicidal one)... Ron make the immense favor of sharing the bock with him... and he f*cks Hermione and his sister???... with friends like him nobody needs enemies!
-This spell seems too to makes them totally stupid... one thing is to 'act on the feelings' and other to become a total slut... and to 'share' without any problem... It seems more like imperious or a brain-washer spell.
And the last part!!!... with ALL the ridiculous Ron-haters out there, this part was boring and used... not a bit funny.
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In short... After this betrayal, Harry is doomed... Ron has all the power so he will take revenge without any problem... He only has to use 'Incensa Cupiditate' on Harry to make him his ass-sl*t... You would make a second part... Ron 'enjoying' Harry, Hermione and Ginny!!!
the sex? average, too 'standard' for my taste... the plot? a bit incoherent...
-This Harry is a total SOB (and a suicidal one)... Ron make the immense favor of sharing the bock with him... and he f*cks Hermione and his sister???... with friends like him nobody needs enemies!
-This spell seems too to makes them totally stupid... one thing is to 'act on the feelings' and other to become a total slut... and to 'share' without any problem... It seems more like imperious or a brain-washer spell.
And the last part!!!... with ALL the ridiculous Ron-haters out there, this part was boring and used... not a bit funny.
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In short... After this betrayal, Harry is doomed... Ron has all the power so he will take revenge without any problem... He only has to use 'Incensa Cupiditate' on Harry to make him his ass-sl*t... You would make a second part... Ron 'enjoying' Harry, Hermione and Ginny!!!
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December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The story was written with Harry/Hermione/Ginny by request
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December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, I liked it. I love Harry/Hermione stories. Although the bit of plot at the beginning was rather pointless in the whole scheme of the story, It was fun to see H/Hr/G. The ron scene was a little disturbing though. Overall, pretty good. Would love to see more chapters with Harry/Hermione.
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December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
funny :D specially at the end.
only thing i didnt like was the pictures you added i mean dude you gonna give us a heart attack specially with ginny pic.... sooo ugly.
think this is the scariest NC-17 story in this site :D
only thing i didnt like was the pictures you added i mean dude you gonna give us a heart attack specially with ginny pic.... sooo ugly.
think this is the scariest NC-17 story in this site :D
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December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
haha i like it, no one writes about h/hg humor stories anymore.
don't mind these ron loving extremist where if it isn't about ron than it sucks.
don't mind these ron loving extremist where if it isn't about ron than it sucks.
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December 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
just goes to show, make sure of your aim before you go messing about with lust spells. :P
so, it'd be interesting to see how they deal with the fall out once the spell wears off... and none of them thought of contraception spells either.
so, it'd be interesting to see how they deal with the fall out once the spell wears off... and none of them thought of contraception spells either.