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schedule December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
bravo, I love the story, was wondering tho, could the room or the chamber help Riddle with his body issue, and when will the other insane Tom come into play, what will Harry's two new allies find out about Tom. What of Remus, when is that confrontation going to happen? Ahhh So many questions
schedule December 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, just the sort of fic I enjoy - I look forward to reading more.
~Riddle
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Nice! When does the higher rating/romance stuff happen?
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I'm really enjoying this story so far - and thanks for the super fast updates today!! I like the way you are developing the Harry/Marvolo relationship - and I find the insights into what Marvolo is thinking (and his motivations/ulterior motives) really great to read! Can't wait for more!!
person llyoung
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story. Thanks for all the updates :) (I don't like Ron either so I hope eventually Harry ends the friendship).
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ron does indeed sound mentally lazy. I could almost feel sorry for dumbles... almost. This is soooooooo going to come back to bite his arse. Having marvolo and moony about will be interesting. siri too and having sev owe him will be priceless. ^^
why the heck didn't ppl like chappie four? I thought i was fine.
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I adore this story! Just saw it this morning and it kept me company through breakfast, had to finish it!!!!
Your writing is witty and entertaining and I'm curious to see where you'll take the story.
I love your Harry/Marvolo and can't wait until voldie makes a show and merges with Marvolo, fun times ahead I'm sure!!!
I'm really hoping that Marvolos presence will keep things from getting to f***ed up like in the 3 book, cus that was just majorly annoying!!!
Despite everything with Sirius, hes a Black! I hate it when JKR portrays him half braindead with stupidity. Somewhere he must have some Slytherin tendensies.
I'm not too fond of teasers (makes me a bit crazy, yes patience isn't my forte...)
Looking forward to your next update.
Thanks for writing and sharing
All the best
marie
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, nice story so far, and i actually enjoyed teh bank trip and the decorating lessons, it's little things like that that show how harry grows, it actually annoys me when all of a sudden whatever character is doing something out of the ordinary and it's just kind of understood that they learned it at some point without the author mentioning it.

as far as the hpfandom posting goes, if you haven't figured it out already: create an account (click on log in and then register), then go to your account page and "add new story", then you'll be able to add new chapters to it through another link on your main account page. hope that helps
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay for more story so quickly, you rock! i think you did a great job with snape, no worries there, and i loved the confrontation with dumbles, like harry said, having to learn to fight his own battles, and even mcgonnegal pointing out dumbles' already bending the rules. and snape and harry have come to an understanding, so at least things will be better with them in private if not in public. i think you've done a really good job of balancing dumbles on that almost evil line while still keeping him in the good by a hair. keep up the great work :)

oh, and as for pming in aff, i still haven't found a way, wish you could though, would make it so much easier to respond to reviews. i think some authors set up a blog or somethng in the forums to respond to reviews on, but i'm not sure. i usually just do what you've done and respond at the end of each of my chapters to anyone i think needs one
schedule December 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i think you did a pretty good snape... and yeah, i agree, poor old remi is very much bata/omega material. the only time he arcs up is to protect what he cares about, the rest of the time it's a bit poor, poor pitiful me. Not that i blame him entirely. when your whole society treats you like crap, it can be hard not to pick up the weeoooo weeoooo attitude. maybe you can find a nice alpha ish character to straighten him out some. cause he was a pretty decent teacher... at least compared to what they had. :P
I hope siri doesn't get stuck as a bit part player, cause as much as he hates snape, he, i think, would do anything for Har... once he's killed a certain rat a lot.

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