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awwww, marvolo's all worried about harry if voldemort's affections should turn to him. and harry was just so sweet and cute about it. and of course the adoption thing couldn't be -that- simple, lucius had to throw in his claim as well. i like how harry immediately blamed dumbles for it though lol. and poor lupin, he tries, but he just keep giving harry reasons not to trust him with everything he does. keep up the great work, can't wait to see more :D

Great chapter! Do you know how long this story is going to be? I hope really long! Please update as soon as possible!

Another amazing chapter :), I really hope lucius doesn't get harry :( can't wait for the next one :D

going on a rat hunt (echos) going to catch a BIG one (echoes) lol
that's a great idea though. exonerate padfoot and he'll have pretty much a free run. I can see why he'd be pissy at both remi and dumbles though.
remi seems to be pretty careless for a dada instructor.
as for the comments on Marvy being mushy, well sheesh, you've already explained that earlier. I'd forgotten the main soul chunk is still pretty much free floating at this stage. It'll be interesting to see how he gets back without the rat.

Fantastic story! I really love it and hope that you will update really soon!

This story is great.

I don't want Hermione to make up with Harry, I hope she realises her mistakes when it's too late.
I like how Ron was against the Headmaster getting the money and I hope he realises he was wrong even if Harry and Ron don't become best friends again.
I hope the Dumbledore gets whats coming to him.
I also can't wait until Sirus is proved innocent hopefully and when Remus hopefully will finally realise not to follow Dumbledore and think about Harry.

I can't wait to see what happens next and when Voldemort gets his body back and what he will do.

Anyway this is an excellent story and I can't wait to see what will happen next.

wellp, it looks like the furry purry is well and truly out of the cloth sack on this one. I wonder how the malfoys plan to capitalize...
It was pretty nifty the har saved buckbeak, even if it was reckless. I hope siri or someone anyway, turns up soon. Har needs someone to confide in before the weight of all those secrets crush him.
as for Har choosing in dumbles as his guardian... bursts into snickers at the mere thought. You'd have to have the naivety of a 1st year hufflepuff to think that'd ever happen. Still, in the words of a famous rabbit 'he don't know him very well, do he?" what can i say, while it's understandable, remi continues to disappoint. quite a pussy of a wolf, definite omega material. I keep finding myself hoping that someone stronger will take him in hand... your cue if ever there was fen... or possibly tonks.
about those touches that har so enjoys... sigh, maybe once he gets his bits together once more, voldi the original will be more amenable to performing them.

yes, i'm reviewing back over here again lol loved your solution to the buckbeak issue, adn marvolo's reaction to it, i think my favorite part was when he looked at harry and basically said "yeah, but now you have to talk to snape" i could just see the dawning horror on harry's face while marvolo gloated lol. and poor harry, starting feel all warm and fuzzy towards marvolo and still knowing what chaos that can only bring. another great chapter, keep it up, i want more! lol

well done on another successful chapter. very interesting points you brought up along the way. I feel that you made snape a bit weak in this chapter. Even with his fear about the prophecy I felt the way you portrayed him, he would make the right choice and not the easy one. I liked the bit with malfoy and his family, and the death eater meeting, I almost want harry introduced to the dark community just to see how it would play out. I think that how you have portrayed harry so far is leading him to be aligned with the dark community rather than the light counterpart. I am anxious to see Voldemort reborn and hopefully see a more charismatic battle strategy rather than the warfare in the books. Well done and I look forward to many more chapters.

Oh my. I sure hope Lucius doesn't do anything to hurt Severus' chances. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

xoxo,
kitkat