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May 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I think your most recent chapter is for a different story
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May 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Huh? I'm... lost.
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September 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
since muggleborns are born of squibs wouldn't they be old blood as well? He wants to destroy magic?
Luna's reproductive system still worked; any kids she had could be raised by others. why sacrifice a piece for nothing?
Luna's reproductive system still worked; any kids she had could be raised by others. why sacrifice a piece for nothing?
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September 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sad Luna died...i am confused on why Ginny and Pansy are still alive since they are both from old pureblood lines
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September 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
why was Luna acting as the pet?
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August 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Dominating the Tolipan sisters was hot especially Erica. Though killing Luna came out of nowhere.
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July 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
hope you continue this!
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May 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm not quite sure how Harry and Hermione broke, but I'm quite enjoying the story. There's far too little dark!HHr out there.
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April 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter Two
Ahh... would that there were a spell to eliminate the need for a bra. Excellent writing!
Ahh... would that there were a spell to eliminate the need for a bra. Excellent writing!
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February 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1:
Fantastic - I laughed, I giggled, mostly at Snape and Dumbledore. The bit with Hermione licking her fingers was hot. But the gore was brilliant. I don't know how you got the violence to slot in so well, but I do love it, particularly the wand in the eye socket, and when Harry ends up covered in bits of Dumbledore's brains and splinters of skull. Great descriptions.
I don't know why, but this played in my imagination like a violent adult cartoon.
Fantastic - I laughed, I giggled, mostly at Snape and Dumbledore. The bit with Hermione licking her fingers was hot. But the gore was brilliant. I don't know how you got the violence to slot in so well, but I do love it, particularly the wand in the eye socket, and when Harry ends up covered in bits of Dumbledore's brains and splinters of skull. Great descriptions.
I don't know why, but this played in my imagination like a violent adult cartoon.