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January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Those chapters were almost all taken from the actual books. I can understand using a paragraph here and there but NOT entire chapters. I don't want to re-read Rowlings' story - I want to read yours! It's boring to read whole pages of Rowlings' actual text.
Grade: Troll
p.s. you have a good story! believe in it. you don't have to rely on the canon text to make a great story. if you must use text from the books, use a passage, not whole pages that become basically the entire chapter. looking forward to reading your next chapter
Grade: Troll
p.s. you have a good story! believe in it. you don't have to rely on the canon text to make a great story. if you must use text from the books, use a passage, not whole pages that become basically the entire chapter. looking forward to reading your next chapter
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January 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!! what a great story and can I say that I am very excited to read the next one. I can't believe they beat Dumbledore (that is how much I got into those two chapters)...This story is really good and I can't wait for more.
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January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sad for Percy. Always thought of him as a prat. Now he has a good reason for it. Hopefully they can get Harry out of this. Outstanding
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love...Love this story and can't wait for more....
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
outstand i love this story!
Please update soon.
Kit
Please update soon.
Kit
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
awww, poor percy...never thought i'd say that lol. dumbles is really going to be in for it once all the truth starts coming out. keep up the good work, i look forward to more :)
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So Dumbles is homophobic manipulative bastard. Personally I hope Sirius I rips the old fart's throat out.
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January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So far a Exceeds Expectations but has potential for outstanding.
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January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
outstanding. love it. Poor Remus. Go Harry and Draco!!!!! Hope to find out more about Harrys abuse and I hope he gets better soon.
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January 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
just a quick note in regards to chapter 7, harry's room was the cupboard until he was 11, not 3, unless you're changing that for your story of course lol